Advertisement— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，建议注意时态和句子结构，避免重复和语法错误，使表达更自然流畅。

Exemplo: Yes, I remember an advertisement for a chocolate that contained a small toy inside. It impressed me because all the children enjoyed the chocolate and were very happy to get the toy.

Sugestão: 回答中有语法错误和表达不完整，建议注意动词时态和句子完整性，使用连接词使表达更连贯。

Exemplo: Yes, I often see advertisements on buses and subways. They are usually displayed on posts or electronic screens to promote new products and services.

Sugestão: 回答中有语法和表达不完整的问题，建议完整表达观点，减少口头语，使用更准确的词汇。

Exemplo: Yes, I like advertisements because they often use moving music and creative images, which make them very charming. I think some advertisements are like pieces of art.

Sugestão: 回答简短且有语法错误，建议扩展内容，使用复合句，并注意主谓一致。

Exemplo: I like food advertisements because they often show delicious dishes that give me a sense of happiness and make me want to try new foods.

Sugestão: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清晰，建议注意时态和句子结构，使用更准确的词汇表达感受。

Exemplo: Yes, I often see advertisements on my phone or computer, and some of them are very annoying because they pop up when I am starting or working.

× Yes, I remember the advertisement about a chocolate which has had a small toy inside it.

✓ Yes, I remember the advertisement about chocolate which had a small toy inside it.

这里的'chocolate'作为不可数名词，不需要冠词'a'，而且时态应与叙述过去的事实一致，使用过去时'had'。

× I remember the IT very clearly because all the children enjoy the chocolate and the the twice happily so I also.

✓ I remember it very clearly because all the children enjoyed the chocolate and ate it happily, so did I.

'IT'不应大写，且句子结构混乱，'the twice'应为'ate it'，动词时态应为过去时，且句子应完整表达意思。

× I often seen some advertising on on TR buses or subways.

✓ I often see some advertising on TR buses or subways.

'often'表示习惯性动作，应使用一般现在时，'seen'是过去分词，正确形式为'see'。

× They are on the posts or electronic uh screens to promote some new products and uh service or.

✓ They are on the posts or electronic screens to promote some new products and services.

'service'应为复数形式'services'，且句尾多余的'or'应去掉。

× Usually use some, uh, moving music and creative, uh, pictures of to make it very charming.

✓ Usually, they use some moving music and creative pictures to make it very charming.

缺少主语，'pictures of'后缺少宾语，应改为'creative pictures'，并补充主语'they'。

× I like the advertising about food, it give me a sense of happiness.

✓ I like advertising about food; it gives me a sense of happiness.

'advertising'作为不可数名词，不需要定冠词'the'，动词's give'应为第三人称单数形式'gives'。

× Yes, some advertisements is very annoying, they just pump out when I was starting or working.

✓ Yes, some advertisements are very annoying; they just pop up when I start or work.

'advertisements'为复数，动词应为'are'，'pump out'用词不当，改为'pop up'更合适，时态应与习惯动作一致，使用一般现在时。