Advertisement— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 回答不够自然流畅，语法错误较多，表达不够清晰。建议简化句子结构，直接回答问题，并补充具体细节。

Exemplo: Yes, I remember a Coca-Cola advertisement featuring a polar bear. It was very interesting and left a strong impression on me because of its cute and friendly character.

Sugestão: 回答中有语法和用词错误，表达不够准确。建议使用更准确的词汇，避免口头语，并用连接词使句子更连贯。

Exemplo: Definitely yes. We can see many advertisements on trains, buses, taxis, and subways because they are effective ways to promote products and attract customers.

Sugestão: 回答不够简洁，表达不流畅，有语法错误。建议直接表达观点，并用具体例子支持，同时避免重复和口头语。

Exemplo: It depends. Sometimes, when I am bored on a plane without Wi-Fi, I find magazine advertisements interesting because they help me pass the time.

Sugestão: 回答缺乏清晰的结构和准确的表达。建议先给出明确的观点，再用具体例子支持，并注意语法和词汇的准确性。

Exemplo: I like various types of advertisements, especially sports and cartoon ads, because I am a big fan of sports competitions.

Sugestão: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清晰的问题。建议使用正确的句子结构，避免重复，并用具体例子说明。

Exemplo: Absolutely yes. When I use my phone or computer, I often see many advertisements, especially in shopping apps where different products are promoted.

× When I was a child there, there are a lot of advertisement made me feel.

✓ When I was a child there, there were a lot of advertisements that made me feel something.

advertisement是可数名词，复数形式应为advertisements；句中时态应为过去时，there are应改为there were。

× I remember the the Coca-Cola advertisement is very interesting.

✓ I remember the Coca-Cola advertisement was very interesting.

时态应与回忆的过去时间一致，is应改为was。

× It's a polar bear during the Coca-Cola.

✓ It features a polar bear in the Coca-Cola advertisement.

原句结构不完整，表达不清，需补充完整句子使意思明确。

× Definitely yes, whether the trains, bus, taxi and subway, we will see a lot of advertisement umm, because it's a good way to show the visit, uh, your item and could attract a lot of uh, customer.

✓ Definitely yes, whether on trains, buses, taxis, or subways, we will see a lot of advertisements, umm, because it's a good way to show your products and attract a lot of customers.

复数形式错误，bus应为buses，advertisement应为advertisements，customer应为customers；介词使用不当，改为on trains等。

× Definitely yes, whether the trains, bus, taxi and subway, we will see a lot of advertisement umm, because it's a good way to show the visit, uh, your item and could attract a lot of uh, customer.

✓ Definitely yes, whether on trains, buses, taxis, or subways, we will see a lot of advertisements, umm, because it's a good way to show your products and attract a lot of customers.

介词使用错误，应该用on表示在交通工具上。

× Definitely yes, whether the trains, bus, taxi and subway, we will see a lot of advertisement umm, because it's a good way to show the visit, uh, your item and could attract a lot of uh, customer.

✓ Definitely yes, whether on trains, buses, taxis, or subways, we will see a lot of advertisements, umm, because it's a good way to show your products and attract a lot of customers.

your item表达不准确，应为your products，指代更合适。

× Wow, It depends on the situation.

✓ Wow, it depends on the situation.

句首It不应大写，除非是专有名词或句首。

× You know when you so boring, for example, you take the plane and you didn't have any, uh, Wi-Fi, you couldn't play the phone.

✓ You know when you are so bored, for example, you take a plane and you don't have any Wi-Fi, you can't use your phone.

so boring应为so bored，形容人的感受；take the plane改为take a plane；时态统一为现在时；play the phone表达错误，应为use your phone。

× Umm, the magazine advertisement is very interesting for you and it's a good way to kill the time.

✓ Umm, magazine advertisements are very interesting for you and they're a good way to kill time.

magazine advertisement应为复数magazine advertisements；kill the time中the不需要。

× Wow, I never thought that.

✓ Wow, I have never thought about that.

表达习惯上应为have never thought about，表示至今未曾想过。

× But I mean I like a variety of the advertising, for example the sport advertising and some cartoon advertising because I am a big friend of the sport competition.

✓ But I mean I like a variety of advertising, for example sports advertising and some cartoon advertising because I am a big fan of sports competitions.

a variety of后面接不可数名词advertising，不加the；sport advertising应为sports advertising；big friend表达错误，应为big fan；sport competition应为sports competitions。

× Absolutely yes. When I use the phone or computer I often could see or short of advertise especially when I open some app.

✓ Absolutely yes. When I use the phone or computer, I can often see or get short advertisements, especially when I open some apps.

advertise是动词，应改为advertisements；some app应为some apps；could see改为can often see更符合语境。

× For example the shopping app you could see different type of the advertising to show your the item.

✓ For example, on shopping apps, you can see different types of advertising to show your items.

shopping app应为复数shopping apps；different type应为different types；your the item表达错误，应为your items。