Advertisement— Part 1 Relatório
Conversa
Part 1
Examinador
Is there an advertisement that made an impression on you when you were a child?
Candidato
Well, there is, and it is about the candies. A giraffe eats the rainbow and then the sheets of the giraffe became the colorful candies. Maybe it sounds disgusting, but at that time I found it really interesting and I bought a lot of this kind of candies.
Examinador
Do you see a lot of advertising on trains or other transport?
Candidato
Yes, I see lots of advertisements on trains and also subways because in Guangzhou people usually use subways to commute, and we usually see many daily products advertisements on the subways, and maybe people will buy these products after seeing the advertisements.
Examinador
Do you like advertisements?
Candidato
Yes, I like advertisements because I think some of them are really interesting and they can make me laugh. But umm I have to admit that some advertisements will make me feel annoyed and and make me feel I'm lack of patience.
Examinador
What kind of advertising do you like?
Candidato
Well I like the advertising with famous stars that I like and because I I have 0 actors and actors I love so much so I love their advertisements. So I usually buy this kind of products because of the advertisements.
Examinador
Do you often see advertisements when you are on your phone or computer?
Candidato
Yes I do, especially when I am watching videos and if I didn't spend money on this app then the advertisements will covered all of my screens and make me cannot focus on my videos anymore and it is really annoying. Annoying.
Avaliação
Total
Part 1
Is there an advertisement that made an impression on you when you were a child?
Pontuação: 70.0Sugestão: 回答时语言稍显不自然，表达有些重复且逻辑不够清晰。建议简化句子结构，避免冗余，并用更准确的词汇描述广告内容。
Exemplo: Yes, I remember a candy advertisement from my childhood where a giraffe ate a rainbow, and its spots turned into colorful candies. Although it sounds strange, I found it fascinating and bought many of those candies.
Do you see a lot of advertising on trains or other transport?
Pontuação: 75.0Sugestão: 回答内容较完整，但句子较长且重复，建议使用连接词使表达更流畅，同时避免重复表达。
Exemplo: Yes, I often see many advertisements on trains and subways in Guangzhou because most people commute by subway. These ads usually promote daily products, which might encourage people to buy them.
Do you like advertisements?
Pontuação: 70.0Sugestão: 回答中有语气词和重复，影响流畅度。建议减少口头语，使用更准确的表达来描述感受。
Exemplo: Yes, I like advertisements because some are very entertaining and make me laugh. However, others can be annoying and test my patience.
What kind of advertising do you like?
Pontuação: 65.0Sugestão: 表达不够清晰，有语法错误和重复。建议理清思路，简洁表达喜欢明星代言广告的原因。
Exemplo: I like advertisements featuring famous stars I admire because their endorsements influence me. As a result, I often buy products they promote.
Do you often see advertisements when you are on your phone or computer?
Pontuação: 70.0Sugestão: 回答中有语法错误和重复，建议使用正确的时态和句式，避免重复表达。
Exemplo: Yes, I often see advertisements when watching videos on my phone or computer. If I don't pay for the app, ads cover the screen and distract me, which is very annoying.
Gramática
× Maybe it sounds disgusting, but at that time I found it really interesting and I bought a lot of this kind of candies.
✓ Maybe it sounds disgusting, but at that time I found it really interesting and I bought a lot of this kind of candy.
“candies”通常指多种糖果的种类，表示复数；而“this kind of”后面应接不可数名词或单数名词，表示某一类糖果，因此应使用“candy”。
× So I usually buy this kind of products because of the advertisements.
✓ So I usually buy this kind of product because of the advertisements.
“this kind of”后面应接不可数名词或单数名词，表示某一类产品，因此应使用“product”。
× ...then the advertisements will covered all of my screens and make me cannot focus on my videos anymore and it is really annoying.
✓ ...then the advertisements will cover all of my screens and make me unable to focus on my videos anymore and it is really annoying.
“will”后应接动词原形，不能用过去式“covered”；“make me cannot”结构不正确，应改为“make me unable to”或“make me not able to”。
× ...and and make me feel I'm lack of patience.
✓ ...and make me feel I'm lacking patience.
“I'm lack of patience”中“lack”是动词，不能直接跟在“I'm”后，应使用动名词“lacking”表示状态。
× ...and if I didn't spend money on this app then the advertisements will covered all of my screens...
✓ ...and if I don't spend money on this app then the advertisements will cover all of my screens...
条件句中应使用一般现在时“don't spend”表示习惯或将来可能发生的情况，而非过去时“didn't spend”。
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