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Sugestão: 답변이 문법적으로 부정확하고 의미 전달이 명확하지 않습니다. 'I was a childhood'는 올바른 표현이 아니며, 문장을 명확하고 자연스럽게 구성해야 합니다. 또한 질문에 직접적으로 답변하고, 구체적인 광고에 대한 설명을 추가하는 것이 필요합니다.

Exemplo: Yes, when I was a child, I was impressed by a cartoon car advertisement because I have always been a big fan of movies and comics.

Sugestão: 문장이 다소 어색하고 문법 오류가 있습니다. 'It has there are many academic advertisement' 부분은 명확하지 않으므로, 문장을 간결하고 정확하게 수정해야 합니다. 또한 구체적인 광고 종류를 명확히 설명하는 것이 좋습니다.

Exemplo: Yes, I often see many advertisements on trains and buses during my commute, such as ads for educational courses and hospital services like surgeries.

Sugestão: 의미 전달이 불명확하고 문법 오류가 많습니다. 'It depends on time of time'은 자연스럽지 않으며, 문장을 명확하게 표현해야 합니다. 또한 자신의 의견을 분명히 하고 구체적인 이유를 덧붙이는 것이 필요합니다.

Exemplo: It depends on the situation. I don't like ads that interrupt me when I'm playing games or watching YouTube, but I enjoy ads related to my favorite topics.

Sugestão: 문법과 표현이 부자연스럽습니다. 'movie advertisement' 대신 'movie advertisements'가 더 적절하며, 이유를 더 구체적으로 설명하는 것이 좋습니다. 문장을 자연스럽게 연결하는 연결어 사용도 필요합니다.

Exemplo: I like movie advertisements because I am a big fan of movies, and they allow me to watch previews and learn about the story.

Sugestão: 문장이 어색하고 문법 오류가 있습니다. 'I can so banner will pop up advertisements' 부분은 의미 전달이 어렵습니다. 문장을 명확하고 자연스럽게 수정하고, 구체적인 상황을 설명하는 것이 필요합니다.

Exemplo: Yes, I often see advertisements on my phone or computer because when I read articles online, banner ads usually pop up.

× I was a childhood.

✓ I was a child.

The phrase 'I was a childhood' is incorrect because 'childhood' is a noun referring to the period of being a child, not a person. The correct term to refer to oneself as a young person is 'child'. 문장 구조 오류: 'I was a childhood'는 'childhood'가 사람을 가리키는 단어가 아니기 때문에 틀렸습니다. 자신을 어린 시절의 사람으로 표현할 때는 'I was a child'가 맞습니다.

× I am very interested in new movie comic cars because I am big fan of movie.

✓ I am very interested in new movie comic cars because I am a big fan of movies.

The sentence is missing the article 'a' before 'big fan' and 'movie' should be plural 'movies' to indicate general interest. Articles and plural forms are important for correct meaning. 형용사 및 부사 사용 오류: 'big fan' 앞에 관사 'a'가 빠졌고, 'movie'는 일반적인 관심을 나타내기 위해 복수형 'movies'가 되어야 합니다.

× I see a lot of advertising on train and bus because I commute to work place by bus and subway.

✓ I see a lot of advertising on trains and buses because I commute to my workplace by bus and subway.

The nouns 'train' and 'bus' should be plural to match 'a lot of advertising on trains and buses'. Also, 'work place' should be one word 'workplace' and 'my' is needed for possession. 단수와 복수 문제: 'train'과 'bus'는 복수형 'trains'와 'buses'로 써야 하며, 'work place'는 'workplace'로 합쳐 쓰고 소유격 'my'가 필요합니다.

× It has there are many academic advertisement or hospital advertisement like surgery.

✓ There are many academic advertisements and hospital advertisements like surgery.

The phrase 'It has there are' is incorrect and redundant. Also, 'advertisement' should be plural 'advertisements' to match 'many'. 문장 구조 오류: 'It has there are'는 잘못된 중복 표현이며, 'advertisement'는 'many'와 함께 복수형 'advertisements'가 되어야 합니다.

× It depends on time of time.

✓ It depends on the time.

The phrase 'time of time' is incorrect and redundant. The correct expression is 'depends on the time'. 수량사 사용 오류: 'time of time'은 잘못되고 중복된 표현이며, 올바른 표현은 'depends on the time'입니다.

× I don't like advertisement which comes when I playing game or watching YouTube but it comes out my favorite.

✓ I don't like advertisements that come when I am playing games or watching YouTube, but some come out as my favorites.

The sentence has several issues: 'advertisement' should be plural 'advertisements'; 'which' is better replaced by 'that' for defining clauses; 'I playing' needs auxiliary verb 'am'; 'game' should be plural 'games'; 'it comes out my favorite' is unclear and corrected to 'some come out as my favorites'. 대명사 사용 오류: 'advertisement'는 복수형 'advertisements'로, 관계대명사 'which'는 제한적 용법에 'that'으로, 'I playing'은 'I am playing'으로, 'game'은 복수형 'games'로, 마지막 문장은 명확하게 수정했습니다.

× I like movie advertisement because I am very big fan of movie so I can see preview on movie story.

✓ I like movie advertisements because I am a big fan of movies, so I can see previews of movie stories.

'movie advertisement' should be plural 'movie advertisements'; missing article 'a' before 'big fan'; 'movie' should be plural 'movies'; 'preview' should be plural 'previews'; 'on movie story' should be 'of movie stories'. 수량사 사용 오류: 'movie advertisement'는 복수형 'movie advertisements'로, 'big fan' 앞에 관사 'a'가 필요하며, 'movie'는 복수형 'movies', 'preview'는 복수형 'previews', 'on movie story'는 'of movie stories'로 수정해야 합니다.

× I always see the advertisements because when I search on Internet article I can so banner will pop up advertisements.

✓ I always see advertisements because when I search for internet articles, banner ads pop up.

'the advertisements' can be simplified to 'advertisements'; 'search on Internet article' should be 'search for internet articles'; 'I can so banner will pop up advertisements' is ungrammatical and corrected to 'banner ads pop up'. 수량사 사용 오류: 'the advertisements'는 'advertisements'로 간단히, 'search on Internet article'는 'search for internet articles'로, 마지막 문장은 문법적으로 올바르게 수정했습니다.