Advertisement— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 回答时应更直接回应问题，避免语法错误，并且用更自然的表达方式。可以简洁地说明没有印象深刻的广告，并给出原因。

Exemplo: No, I don't remember any specific advertisement from my childhood because I probably didn't pay much attention to them at that time.

Sugestão: 回答中存在语法错误和重复，应注意句子结构和用词准确。可以用连接词使回答更连贯。

Exemplo: Yes, I see advertisements everywhere on buses and subways. Most of them promote products, but some are about charity. However, I usually don't pay much attention to them.

Sugestão: 回答应更流畅，避免语法错误和不完整句子。表达观点时要清晰并用连接词。

Exemplo: To be honest, I dislike advertisements, especially during TV programs because they interrupt the show. However, since they are everywhere, I usually just skip or close them.

Sugestão: 回答较好，但语法有误，应注意主谓一致和时态。可以增加连接词使表达更自然。

Exemplo: I really like advertisements that are creative because they are fun to watch and help me remember the brand.

Sugestão: 回答中有词汇使用错误（losing应为using），应注意词汇准确性和句子流畅性。可以用连接词使句子更连贯。

Exemplo: Yes, I often see advertisements when using my phone or computer. They usually appear on social media and websites I visit, and sometimes they annoy me because they interrupt what I'm doing.

× No really, I watched a lot of advertising.

✓ No really, I watched a lot of advertisements.

advertising 是不可数名词，表示广告的整体概念；此处应使用复数形式 advertisements 表示多个具体的广告。

× Maybe I just didn't pay much attention on them.

✓ Maybe I just didn't pay much attention to them.

动词短语 pay attention 后应接介词 to，表示“注意某事”，不能用 on。

× Sure, from bus to subways I can see advertising everywhere.

✓ Sure, from buses to subways I can see advertisements everywhere.

bus 和 subway 都应使用复数形式表示多种交通工具；advertising 应改为复数 advertisements 表示多个广告。

× Most of advertising is about goods.

✓ Most of the advertisements are about goods.

advertising 是不可数名词，不能用 most of 修饰；应使用复数名词 advertisements 并加定冠词 the。谓语动词也应与复数主语一致，使用 are。

× Umm, few of them. It's about charity.

✓ Umm, a few of them are about charity.

few 表示几乎没有，a few 表示一些；此处应使用 a few 表示有一些广告是关于慈善的。句子缺少谓语动词，应补充 are。

× But I didn't pay attention. Pay on them.

✓ But I didn't pay attention to them.

pay attention 后应接介词 to，不能用 on。此处重复表达应合并为一句。

× Well to be honest I hate them very much, especially when watching TV programs, it interrupts the videos but advertising are everywhere.

✓ Well, to be honest, I hate them very much, especially when watching TV programs; they interrupt the videos, but advertisements are everywhere.

advertising 是不可数名词，复数形式应为 advertisements；主语 it 指代不明确，应改为 they 指代广告。

× The only one I just can do. Just close it.

✓ The only thing I can do is just close it.

原句缺少谓语和完整结构，应补充完整句子，使表达清晰。

× Well, I really into the advertising that are really creative because they are fun to watch and it can make me remember the brand.

✓ Well, I am really into advertisements that are really creative because they are fun to watch and they can help me remember the brand.

动词短语 be into 后应接名词或名词短语，缺少系动词 am；advertising 应用复数形式 advertisements；it 指代不明确，应改为 they；make sb remember 更自然表达为 help sb remember。

× Yes, I frequently come across advertisement while losing my phone or computer.

✓ Yes, I frequently come across advertisements while using my phone or computer.

advertisement 应用复数形式 advertisements；lose phone/computer 表达不当，应为 use phone/computer。

× These advertising often appear on social media platforms and websites I visit.

✓ These advertisements often appear on social media platforms and websites I visit.

advertising 是不可数名词，复数形式应为 advertisements。

× Sometimes I will be annoyed when I see them because it interrupts the things I'm doing.

✓ Sometimes I get annoyed when I see them because they interrupt the things I'm doing.

it 指代不明确，应改为 they 指代广告；interrupt 后接复数主语时谓语动词用复数形式 interrupt；be annoyed 更自然表达为 get annoyed。