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Sugestão: 回答时语法和表达不够准确，句子结构较为简单且有重复和断句问题。建议注意语法正确性，避免重复，并使用连贯的句子表达观点。

Exemplo: Yes, when I was a child, I was impressed by an ice cream advertisement. It showed two boys enjoying the ice cream and expressing their satisfaction. This made me really want to try that ice cream at the time.

Sugestão: 回答内容较为简单，存在语法错误和表达不流畅的问题。建议使用更准确的时态和表达方式，并增加细节使回答更具体。

Exemplo: Yes, I often see many advertisements in public transportation, especially in subways. There are small TV screens that display various ads, such as those for ice cream and furniture.

Sugestão: 表达中有重复和语法错误，逻辑不够清晰。建议简洁明了地表达观点，避免重复，并用连贯的句子说明原因。

Exemplo: No, I don't like advertisements because they waste my time. For instance, when I want to buy something or check bus information, ads appear on my screen first, which annoys me.

Sugestão: 回答中表达不够自然，有语法和用词错误。建议用更准确的表达方式说明喜欢的广告类型，并具体说明原因。

Exemplo: I like food advertisements because I enjoy trying delicious dishes. They provide useful information like the types of food, restaurant locations, and prices.

Sugestão: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不流畅，建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并用连贯的语言表达观点。

Exemplo: Yes, I often see advertisements on my phone, such as when I check the bus schedule or shop online. These ads annoy me because they waste my time.

× There was two boys who owned the ice cream and tasted them.

✓ There were two boys who owned the ice cream and tasted it.

这里的主语是复数“two boys”，谓语动词应该用复数形式“were”，而不是单数“was”。另外，“ice cream”是不可数名词，不能用复数代词“them”，应使用单数代词“it”。

× Also.

✓ Also,

“Also”作为连接词时，后面应接逗号，不能单独成句。

× There will there are some small TV screens and always put some advertisements on them like the ice cream, the furnitures and so on.

✓ There are some small TV screens and they always put some advertisements on them like ice cream, furniture and so on.

“There will there are”重复且不合适，应去掉“will”。“furnitures”是不可数名词，不能加复数形式，应改为“furniture”。

× I really I am really annoyed of that about that.

✓ I am really annoyed about that.

“annoyed”后面应接介词“about”，而不是“of”。另外，句子中重复“I really”应删除多余部分。

× I like to see some advertisements about food because I enjoy eating delicious food and buy advertising.

✓ I like to see some advertisements about food because I enjoy eating delicious food and buying advertisements.

“buy advertising”表达不正确，应改为动名词形式“buying advertisements”或更自然的表达。

× I can know the types, the location and even the price of that food or restaurant.

✓ I can know the types, the location and even the price of that food or restaurant.

此句无明显介词错误，保持原句。

× It's really annoys me and with my time.

✓ It really annoys me and wastes my time.

“really”应放在动词前修饰动词“annoys”，且“with my time”表达不当，应改为“wastes my time”。