Advertisement— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 回答时语言不够流畅，存在较多犹豫词（如“umm”）和重复，表达不够清晰。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，直接表达印象深刻的广告内容，并适当补充细节。

Exemplo: Yes, I remember a family advertisement on TV that impressed me when I was a child. It showed the loving relationship between the father and mother, which made me feel warm and happy.

Sugestão: 回答中存在重复和犹豫词，句子结构不够紧凑。建议减少重复，使用连贯的句子表达观点，并用连接词使内容更连贯。

Exemplo: Yes, I often see many advertisements on public transport such as subways, trains, and even elevators. These places attract attention because people spend time there, making them ideal for advertising.

Sugestão: 回答中表达不够自然，存在语法错误和犹豫词。建议简化表达，直接说明喜欢的广告类型，并举具体例子说明原因。

Exemplo: Yes, I like advertisements that have good design. For example, I saw a large makeup ad featuring a beautiful celebrity, which made me want to buy the product.

Sugestão: 回答表达混乱，词汇使用不准确，句子不完整。建议明确表达喜欢的广告类型，使用准确词汇，并用连贯句子说明原因。

Exemplo: I like viral advertisements, such as posters or videos, because they are well designed, attractive, and meet my interests.

× I still have a strong impression on the family advertisement umm posting on the TV when I was a child

✓ I still have a strong impression of the family advertisement umm playing on the TV when I was a child

这里应使用动词的现在分词形式来表示电视上播放的动作，'posting'通常指张贴，不适合描述电视播放，应改为'playing'。

× I still have a strong impression on the family advertisement

✓ I still have a strong impression of the family advertisement

固定搭配是'have an impression of'，表示对某事物的印象，不能用'on'。

× I was impressed by the uh, the character of family umm be umm, this uh be divided into father umm and the mother love

✓ I was impressed by the characters of the family, which were divided into the father and the mother's love

原句结构混乱，缺少主谓一致和连词，需调整句子结构使其通顺。

× the character of family

✓ the characters of the family

'character'应为复数形式'characters'，因为指的是家庭中的多个角色。

× I have seen a lot of attachments on the public transport

✓ I have seen a lot of advertisements on public transport

'attachments'错误，应为'advertisements'，且'public transport'前不加定冠词'the'。

× this places people can stay for a long time time

✓ these places where people can stay for a long time

'this places'应为'these places'，且需加关系代词'where'引导定语从句。

× there is a opportunity to, uh, gain, uh, publicity

✓ there is an opportunity to gain publicity

'a opportunity'错误，'opportunity'以元音音素开头，前面应使用'an'。

× I like to admire the advertisement, uh, which have umm, good design

✓ I like to admire advertisements which have good design

'advertisement'应为复数'advertisements'，且关系代词'which'指复数时谓语动词用'have'。

× I encountered a large gram of a makeup, uh, advertisement and with a beautiful celebrity on them

✓ I encountered a large gram of a makeup advertisement with a beautiful celebrity on it

'advertisement'为单数，指代时用单数代词'it'，且'and with'多余，应删去。

× So uh, I make me want to buy the same

✓ So, it makes me want to buy the same

主语应为'it'指代广告，'make'需加第三人称单数形式'makes'，'I make me'错误。

× Why like to say viral uh virus, genre, advertisement including the poster or videos umm the only recommend

✓ I like to say viral genre advertisements including posters or videos that I only recommend

句子缺主语，'Why'应为'I'，'the only recommend'结构不完整，需补充。

× They are uh well designed and umm be charming for charming and can umm meet my needs

✓ They are well designed and charming and can meet my needs

'be charming for charming'重复且错误，应简化为'charming'。