Advertisement— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer needs to be more coherent and grammatically correct. Try to start with a clear topic sentence directly answering the question, then add specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid redundancy and incomplete sentences. Also, keep your answer within 5 sentences.

Exemplo: Yes, there was an advertisement that impressed me as a child. It featured a motivational speech about effective study habits. I watched it carefully and felt inspired to work harder. As a result, I performed very well in my school exams. This advertisement motivated me a lot.

Sugestão: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Please try to give a direct response first, then explain with clear and specific details using linking words. Avoid incomplete sentences and irrelevant information. Keep your answer concise and logical.

Exemplo: Yes, in India, there are many advertisements on public transport like buses and trains. Public transport is widely used, so advertisers find it effective. However, some advertisements are put up without permission, which is illegal. Overall, advertising on transport is very common here.

Sugestão: Your answer is relevant but needs better sentence structure and vocabulary. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add specific reasons with linking words. Avoid repetition and incomplete phrases. Use correct plural forms and articles.

Exemplo: Yes, I like advertisements because they often provide motivation and useful lessons. Many ads teach us valuable insights that we can apply in daily life. For example, some advertisements encourage healthy habits or goal setting. These messages help me stay focused and inspired.

Sugestão: Your answer needs to be clearer and more structured. Begin with a direct answer, then explain with specific details using linking words. Avoid vague phrases and grammatical mistakes. Keep your answer concise and relevant.

Exemplo: To be honest, I prefer advertisements that provide brief information about current affairs. Such ads help people stay updated with important news from around the world. For instance, some ads highlight social issues or government initiatives. These types of advertisements are very informative and useful.

× Definitely, when I was a child, one day I have an advertisement on which a person gives some motivational speech on how to study in the At that time, I read that advertisement for about two hours and I am full of motivation.

✓ Definitely, when I was a child, one day I saw an advertisement in which a person gave a motivational speech on how to study. At that time, I watched that advertisement for about two hours and I was full of motivation.

The sentence mixes present tense 'have' and 'gives' with past context 'when I was a child'. The correct tense for past events is past tense, so 'have' should be 'saw' and 'gives' should be 'gave'. Also, 'read' is incorrect here because advertisements are usually watched or seen, not read, so 'watched' fits better. 'I am' should be 'I was' to maintain past tense consistency.

× And at that time I scored a very well in my school examinations.

✓ And at that time I scored very well in my school examinations.

The phrase 'a very well' is incorrect because 'well' is an adverb and does not need an article 'a'. Also, 'scored' is correctly in past tense matching the time frame.

× Definitely in our country India, there is a lot of advertisement on the transport like the public transport.

✓ Definitely, in our country India, there is a lot of advertising on transport like public transport.

'Advertisement' is countable and should be plural when referring to many ads, but here 'advertising' (uncountable noun) is more appropriate to refer to the general presence of ads. Also, 'the transport' is incorrect; 'transport' without 'the' is better when speaking generally.

× The public transport is one of the efficient benefits for the persons.

✓ Public transport is one of the efficient benefits for people.

'The public transport' is better as 'Public transport' when speaking generally. 'For the persons' is unnatural; 'for people' is more natural. Also, 'efficient benefits' is awkward; however, since the instruction limits corrections to grammar problem types, only preposition and article issues are corrected here.

× But at present there is a lot of advertisement the person and some people who are who have do not have the permission.

✓ But at present, there are a lot of advertisements by people, including some who do not have permission.

The original sentence is confusing and ungrammatical. 'There is a lot of advertisement the person' is incorrect structure. 'There are a lot of advertisements by people' is clearer. 'Who have do not have' is incorrect; it should be 'who do not have'. This correction addresses sentence structure and subject-verb agreement.

× They illegally paid some advertisements on that which gives.

✓ They illegally placed some advertisements there which give information.

'Paid some advertisements' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'placed' or 'put up'. 'Gives' should be 'give' to agree with plural 'advertisements'. Also, 'on that' is vague; 'there' is clearer. The sentence is corrected to past tense and subject-verb agreement.

× Definitely, I always like advertisement because of their motivational and some lessons or insights.

✓ Definitely, I always like advertisements because of their motivational content and some lessons or insights.

'Advertisement' should be plural 'advertisements' when referring to ads in general. 'Their' refers to plural, so the noun should be plural to agree. Added 'content' after 'motivational' for clarity.

× There are various advertisement which gives some lessons and insights by which we can apply in our daily life to get some and achieve our goal.

✓ There are various advertisements which give some lessons and insights that we can apply in our daily life to achieve our goals.

'Advertisement' should be plural 'advertisements' to agree with 'are various'. 'Gives' should be 'give' to agree with plural subject. 'By which we can apply' is awkward; 'that we can apply' is better. 'Get some and achieve our goal' is unclear; simplified to 'achieve our goals'.

× To be honest, I usually prefer the advertisement which gives us a brief knowledge about the current affairs, the current affairs of the most important for a person's knowledge.

✓ To be honest, I usually prefer advertisements which give us brief knowledge about current affairs, which are very important for a person's knowledge.

'The advertisement' should be plural 'advertisements' to refer generally. 'A brief knowledge' is incorrect; 'brief knowledge' is uncountable and does not need 'a'. 'The current affairs of the most important' is ungrammatical; corrected to 'current affairs, which are very important'.

× Knowledge they gives us all world and each corners news to our mind.

✓ They give us knowledge of the whole world and news from every corner to our minds.

'Knowledge they gives' is incorrect word order and verb agreement; 'They give knowledge' is correct. 'All world' should be 'the whole world'. 'Each corners news' should be 'news from every corner'. 'Our mind' should be plural 'our minds' to match plural subject.