Computers— Part 1 Relatório
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Part 1
Examinador
In what conditions would you use a computer?
Candidato
The condition is I use computer uh, for working my career, uh, almost just complete over 100% to working and to uh, and also free time. I use computer for relaxing.
Examinador
When was the first time you used a computer?
Candidato
I use computer in the first time during uh classroom because uh, we have to uh, learn computer lesson, uh, how to use standard of computers and basic uh, for.
Examinador
What would your life be like without a computer?
Candidato
I like smartphone nowadays smartphone uh, can be instead of a computer, because a lot of our self smartphone function uh, many software can be adapted in a smartphone, or we can watch movie in smartphone, we can do everything.
Examinador
In what conditions would it be difficult for you to use a computer?
Candidato
Uh, I think difficult to use a computer during my holiday, for example, I went vacation, uh, somewhere else, but the, the area cannot be used computers as well. So it's very hard to.
Avaliação
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Part 1
In what conditions would you use a computer?
Pontuação: 55.0Sugestão: คำตอบควรชัดเจนและเป็นธรรมชาติมากขึ้น โดยตอบตรงคำถามและหลีกเลี่ยงการใช้คำซ้ำหรือคำที่ไม่จำเป็น ควรเพิ่มรายละเอียดที่ชัดเจนและใช้คำเชื่อมเพื่อความลื่นไหลของประโยค
Exemplo: I usually use a computer for my work because most of my tasks require it. Besides work, I also use it during my free time to relax, such as watching movies or browsing the internet.
When was the first time you used a computer?
Pontuação: 50.0Sugestão: ควรตอบให้ครบถ้วนและชัดเจนมากขึ้น โดยเริ่มด้วยประโยคหลักที่ตอบคำถามและตามด้วยรายละเอียดเพิ่มเติม ใช้คำเชื่อมเพื่อให้ประโยคสมบูรณ์และลื่นไหล
Exemplo: The first time I used a computer was in a classroom when I was a student. We had a computer lesson where we learned the basics and how to use standard software.
What would your life be like without a computer?
Pontuação: 60.0Sugestão: ควรตอบตรงคำถามและจัดระเบียบประโยคให้ชัดเจน ใช้คำเชื่อมเพื่อเชื่อมโยงความคิดและหลีกเลี่ยงการพูดซ้ำหรือใช้คำไม่จำเป็น
Exemplo: Without a computer, I think my life would rely heavily on my smartphone. Nowadays, smartphones have many functions and software that can replace computers for tasks like watching movies or browsing the internet.
In what conditions would it be difficult for you to use a computer?
Pontuação: 55.0Sugestão: ควรตอบให้สมบูรณ์และชัดเจนมากขึ้น โดยใช้ประโยคที่สมบูรณ์และคำเชื่อมเพื่อให้คำตอบมีความลื่นไหลและเข้าใจง่าย
Exemplo: It would be difficult for me to use a computer when I am on holiday in remote areas where there is no internet or electricity. In such places, using a computer is almost impossible.
Gramática
× The condition is I use computer uh, for working my career, uh, almost just complete over 100% to working and to uh, and also free time.
✓ The condition is I use a computer, uh, for working in my career, uh, almost just complete over 100% of work, and also in my free time.
The noun 'computer' is countable and requires an article 'a' when singular. Also, 'working my career' is incorrect; it should be 'working in my career'. The phrase 'complete over 100% to working' is unclear and corrected to 'complete over 100% of work' to make sense.
× I use computer for relaxing.
✓ I use a computer for relaxing.
The noun 'computer' is countable and singular here, so it requires the article 'a' before it.
× I use computer in the first time during uh classroom because uh, we have to uh, learn computer lesson, uh, how to use standard of computers and basic uh, for.
✓ I used a computer for the first time during a classroom because we had to learn computer lessons, how to use standard computers and basics.
The question asks about a past event, so the verb should be in past tense 'used' instead of 'use'. Also, 'in the first time' should be 'for the first time'. 'During uh classroom' should be 'during a classroom'. 'Learn computer lesson' should be 'learn computer lessons' (plural). 'How to use standard of computers and basic' is unclear and corrected to 'how to use standard computers and basics'.
× I like smartphone nowadays smartphone uh, can be instead of a computer, because a lot of our self smartphone function uh, many software can be adapted in a smartphone, or we can watch movie in smartphone, we can do everything.
✓ I like smartphones nowadays. Smartphones can be used instead of a computer because many smartphone functions and software can be adapted, and we can watch movies on smartphones; we can do everything.
'Smartphone' should be plural 'smartphones' when talking generally. 'Can be instead of a computer' is corrected to 'can be used instead of a computer'. 'A lot of our self smartphone function' is unclear and corrected to 'many smartphone functions'. 'Many software' should be 'much software' or 'many software applications', but 'software' is uncountable, so 'many software' is incorrect. 'Watch movie' should be 'watch movies'. Preposition 'in smartphone' corrected to 'on smartphones'.
× Uh, I think difficult to use a computer during my holiday, for example, I went vacation, uh, somewhere else, but the, the area cannot be used computers as well.
✓ Uh, I think it is difficult to use a computer during my holiday. For example, when I go on vacation somewhere else, the area does not have computers available, so it's very hard to use one.
'I think difficult' is missing 'it is' to be correct. 'I went vacation' should be 'I go on vacation' or 'when I go on vacation' for general statement. 'The area cannot be used computers' is incorrect; it should be 'the area does not have computers available'. Also, 'computers' is plural and needs to be used correctly with 'have'.
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