Computers— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 你的回答中存在语法错误和重复用词，表达不够自然。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并使用更地道的表达方式。

Exemplo: I usually use a computer when I need to study or complete some work. Also, I use it for entertainment during my free time.

Sugestão: 回答中断断续续，句子不完整，缺少连贯性。建议使用完整句子，并用连接词使表达更流畅。

Exemplo: I first used a computer when I was a pupil. It belonged to my sister, who was a college student then. I mainly played games on it for fun.

Sugestão: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清晰的问题。建议注意主谓一致，使用更准确的词汇，并且句子结构更完整。

Exemplo: Without a computer, it would be harder to access instant information. Tasks like programming and video editing would also become more difficult.

Sugestão: 回答不完整且表达混乱，缺少清晰的主题句和连贯的细节。建议组织好句子结构，表达完整的想法。

Exemplo: It would be difficult to use a computer when I forget to save my work, like a PowerPoint file, after spending a long time on it. This can be very frustrating and exhausting.

× When I was a kid, I just. Playing some games to have fun.

✓ When I was a kid, I just played some games to have fun.

句子中缺少谓语动词，'Playing' 应改为过去式 'played'，以符合句子时态和结构。

× Without computer, some instant information are more hard to get and some tasks like programming and video acting can be more difficult.

✓ Without a computer, some instant information is harder to get and some tasks like programming and video acting can be more difficult.

'computer' 前缺少冠词 'a'，'information' 是不可数名词，谓语动词应使用单数形式 'is'，'more hard' 应改为 'harder'。

× I utilize a computer mainly on the circumstance that when I need study and and finish some works, yeah, sometimes I will.

✓ I utilize a computer mainly in circumstances when I need to study and finish some work; yeah, sometimes I will.

'on the circumstance' 应改为 'in circumstances'，'need study' 应加不定式 'to study'，'works' 应改为不可数名词 'work'。

× She was a She was a college student at that time.

✓ She was a college student at that time.

句子中重复了 'She was a'，应删除多余部分。

× Without computer, some instant information are more hard to get and some tasks like programming and video acting can be more difficult.

✓ Without a computer, some instant information is harder to get and some tasks like programming and video acting can be more difficult.

'information' 是不可数名词，谓语动词应使用单数形式 'is'。

× Maybe it is about work, for example when you forget to save the PowerPoint and file after a long time finishing yeah and you, you drain your energy and all you do is in vain.

✓ Maybe it is about work, for example, when you forget to save the PowerPoint and file after finishing for a long time, yeah, and you drain your energy and all you do is in vain.

'after a long time finishing' 结构不正确，应改为 'after finishing for a long time'，并且句中缺少逗号以分隔插入语。