Computers— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 你的回答中存在语法错误，如时态和冠词使用不当，且表达不够简洁自然。建议注意动词时态一致性，避免重复词汇，并使用更地道的表达方式。

Exemplo: I usually use a computer to prepare presentations and complete my homework because it helps me organize information and work more efficiently.

Sugestão: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，且句子结构较为简单。建议使用更准确的时间表达，避免重复词汇，并丰富细节使回答更自然。

Exemplo: I first used a computer when I was five years old because my father bought a new one that year. I found it very interesting and enjoyed playing many games on it.

Sugestão: 回答表达了观点，但重复较多，且部分句子结构简单。建议避免重复，使用连接词使表达更连贯，并丰富细节。

Exemplo: I think my life would be very difficult without a computer because I use it daily to complete my work and stay in touch with my family and friends.

Sugestão: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，且逻辑不够连贯。建议理清思路，使用正确的词汇表达困难的具体情况，并使用连接词。

Exemplo: I find it difficult to use a computer when I have to enter special or complex data because I'm not very familiar with this technology.

× For myself, I often used it prepared my presentation or finished my homework because it can helps me organize the the information and makes my work more efficiently.

✓ For myself, I often use it to prepare my presentation or finish my homework because it can help me organize the information and make my work more efficient.

句中动词短语使用不当，'used it prepared' 应改为 'use it to prepare'，表示目的；'can helps' 中 'helps' 应为原形 'help'，因为情态动词后动词用原形；'makes' 应改为 'make'，与主语 'it' 一致。'efficiently' 应改为形容词 'efficient' 修饰名词 'work'。

× Why five years old? I first used the computer because my father bought a new computer during this year, and I found the the computer was very interesting. I played many games on computer.

✓ When I was five years old, I first used the computer because my father bought a new computer that year, and I found the computer very interesting. I played many games on the computer.

句首 'Why five years old?' 语法错误，应为 'When I was five years old'；'during this year' 不自然，改为 'that year'；'the the computer' 重复，应删去一个 'the'；'on computer' 应为 'on the computer'。

× I think my life will be terrible because I can't live without it. I use the computer every day. I need it to finish my job and connect it with my parents and my friends. I can't live without it.

✓ I think my life would be terrible because I can't live without it. I use the computer every day. I need it to finish my work and connect with my parents and my friends. I can't live without it.

回答假设情况时，'will be' 应用虚拟语气 'would be'；'finish my job' 应为 'finish my work' 更合适；'connect it with' 中 'it' 多余，应直接说 'connect with'。

× For myself, when I have to enter some special fake date, it may be difficult for me because I'm not scared about this technology. So I think it's a little hard for me.

✓ For me, when I have to enter some special fake data, it may be difficult because I'm not familiar with this technology. So I think it's a little hard for me.

'For myself' 应为 'For me'；'fake date' 应为 'fake data'；'scared about' 用法错误，应为 'familiar with'；句子更通顺。