Art— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và mạch lạc. Bạn nên sử dụng câu chủ đề rõ ràng, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp hơn. Hãy cố gắng sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời trở nên logic và dễ hiểu hơn.

Exemplo: Yes, I really enjoy drawing because it helps me express my emotions and creativity. I usually draw in my free time, especially when I go out with my friends or relax at home.

Sugestão: Bạn nên chú ý đến ngữ pháp và cách sử dụng thì trong câu. Ngoài ra, hãy sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và cung cấp thêm chi tiết cụ thể để làm phong phú câu trả lời.

Exemplo: Yes, I like going to art galleries because I find them inspiring. However, I am quite busy with work and study, so I don't have much time. If I had more free time, I would visit galleries more often.

Sugestão: Câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác. Bạn nên luyện tập cách sử dụng thì và từ vựng liên quan đến chủ đề. Hãy cố gắng nói rõ ràng, mạch lạc và sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời có cấu trúc tốt hơn.

Exemplo: Yes, I want to learn more about art, but I am very busy. When I have free time, I try to read news or articles related to art to improve my knowledge.

Sugestão: Câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và thiếu sự rõ ràng. Bạn nên luyện tập cách sử dụng thì quá khứ và cấu trúc câu đơn giản nhưng chính xác. Ngoài ra, hãy cung cấp thêm chi tiết cụ thể để câu trả lời sinh động hơn.

Exemplo: No, I didn't learn drawing when I was a child because my parents wanted me to focus on subjects like English and Vietnamese. However, I started to find drawing interesting when I was in high school.

× I love drawing because drawing can have me impress my.

✓ I love drawing because drawing can impress me.

The phrase 'have me impress my' is incorrect. The verb 'have' followed by an object and a verb in the base form is a causative structure, but here it is misused. The correct form is 'drawing can impress me' to express that drawing causes an impression on me.

× I love drawing because drawing can have me impress my.

✓ I love drawing because drawing can impress me.

The pronoun 'my' is incorrectly used here; it should be 'me' as the object of the verb 'impress'. 'My' is a possessive adjective and cannot be used as an object pronoun.

× Knowledge you might think an my emotion so I usually drawing when I have free time when I go out with my friend or something like that.

✓ You might think about my knowledge and emotions, so I usually draw when I have free time or when I go out with my friends or something like that.

The original sentence is fragmented and lacks proper structure. 'Knowledge you might think an my emotion' is unclear and ungrammatical. The correction clarifies the meaning and uses proper verb forms and conjunctions.

× I usually drawing when I have free time when I go out with my friend or something like that.

✓ I usually draw when I have free time or when I go out with my friends or something like that.

The verb 'drawing' is incorrectly used here; after 'usually' the base form 'draw' should be used to indicate habitual action.

× I really fancy go to the gallery but I am a busy person so I spent all of my time to work and study but if I have realized time I will go to the gallery more.

✓ I really fancy going to the gallery, but I am a busy person so I spend all of my time working and studying. But if I have free time, I will go to the gallery more.

'Fancy' is followed by a gerund ('going'), not the base verb. 'Spent all of my time to work' is incorrect; it should be 'spend all of my time working'. 'Realized time' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'free time'.

× I spent all of my time to work and study but if I have realized time I will go to the gallery more.

✓ I spend all of my time working and studying, but if I have free time, I will go to the gallery more.

The sentence mixes past tense 'spent' with present and future contexts. Since the statement is about a habitual action, present tense 'spend' is appropriate.

× I really fancy go to the gallery

✓ I really fancy going to the gallery

'Fancy' is followed by a gerund (-ing form), not the base verb. Therefore, 'go' should be 'going'.

× I don't have much time to studying about art

✓ I don't have much time to study art

'To' is a preposition here and should be followed by the base form of the verb 'study', not the gerund 'studying'. Also, 'about' is unnecessary after 'study'.

× I have square time I will size a news coral relate to that.

✓ If I have spare time, I will read news articles related to that.

'Square time' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'spare time'. 'Size a news coral' is nonsensical; likely intended 'read news articles'. 'Relate to that' should be 'related to that'.

× When I were a kid, my parents spent all of my time.

✓ When I was a kid, my parents spent all of their time.

'Were' is incorrect for the singular subject 'I'; the correct past tense is 'was'. Also, 'my parents spent all of my time' is illogical; parents spend their own time, so 'their time' is correct.

× When I were a kid, my parents spent all of my time.

✓ When I was a kid, my parents spent all of their time.

'My time' is incorrect here because parents cannot spend the child's time; they spend their own time.

× Those study subject relate to Smith English and Vietnamese as so I don't live drawing more,

✓ Those study subjects related to English and Vietnamese, so I didn't like drawing much.

'Study subject relate to Smith English and Vietnamese as' is incorrect. It should be 'study subjects related to English and Vietnamese'. 'I don't live drawing more' is incorrect; likely intended 'I didn't like drawing much'.

× I don't live drawing more, but I study in a high school.

✓ I didn't like drawing much, but I studied in high school.

The sentence refers to past time, so past tense 'didn't like' and 'studied' should be used instead of present tense.

× I think a drawing very very interesting.

✓ I think drawing is very, very interesting.

The article 'a' is unnecessary before 'drawing' here. Also, the verb 'is' is needed to link the subject and adjective. 'Very very' should be separated by a comma for clarity.