Dreams— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Improve grammar and clarity: use correct tense and simpler structure. Begin with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details. Use linking words like "because" correctly and avoid redundancy.

Exemplo: Yes. I have always remembered my dream of visiting the biggest stadium in North London, the Arsenal Football Club ground. I want to go there because I love football and I would enjoy watching a live match in such a famous stadium.

Sugestão: Make the idea concise and grammatical: state whether you share dreams, give a reason, and add a brief example. Use linking words like "because" or "so" correctly.

Exemplo: No, I usually don't share my important dreams because I prefer to keep them private. For example, I haven't told many people about visiting Arsenal because I want to focus on making it happen without outside distractions.

Sugestão: Clarify and correct grammar: state your opinion, then give clear reasons and specific examples. Use linking words like "for example" or "when" to connect ideas, and avoid vague phrases.

Exemplo: Yes, I think dreams can reflect our emotions. For example, when I am anxious during the day, I often have scary or confusing dreams, but when I feel calm I tend to dream about pleasant scenes.

Sugestão: Answer directly and give specific reasons: say yes or no, explain why, and include one concrete example or plan. Use correct grammar and avoid repetition.

Exemplo: Yes, I want to make my dreams come true, especially those that would bring me happiness. For instance, I plan to save money and travel to London to visit Arsenal's stadium because that would be a dream fulfilled.

× The dreams that I've never forgotten until now was the dream to go to the biggest stadium in North London, England.

✓ The dream that I've never forgotten until now was to go to the biggest stadium in North London, England.

The subject refers to a single dream, so use singular 'dream' not plural 'dreams'. Also remove the extra 'the' before 'dream to go' and use the infinitive 'to go' directly after 'was'. Suggestion: identify whether you mean one dream or many and make subject and verb agree; keep the infinitive form after 'was'. Grammar problem type id:1

× Because I love football so much, I would like to visit, admitted stadium, the stadium from the Arsenal Football Club.

✓ Because I love football so much, I would like to visit the stadium of Arsenal Football Club.

'admitted stadium' is incorrect and unnecessary. Use the definite article 'the' with 'stadium' and use 'of Arsenal Football Club' or 'Arsenal's stadium' to show possession. Also avoid comma splice. Suggestion: use correct possessive or 'of' construction and remove extra words. Grammar problem type id:22

× I don't share my dream when I think that I really like to make it dreams come true because it is like the obstacle for me for to share about it dream if it that dream would like to come true.

✓ I don't share my dream because I want to make it come true, and sharing it would feel like an obstacle to achieving it.

Multiple pronoun errors: 'it dreams' and 'it dream' are incorrect. Use a clear pronoun 'it' to refer to 'my dream'. Also reduce redundancy and correct infinitive forms ('to make it come true' not 'to make it dreams come true'). Suggestion: refer to the dream with a single consistent pronoun and simplify sentence structure. Grammar problem type id:12

× Yes, I think that every dream that I felt when I am sleeping is always has meaning, such as when I'm so panic, so my dreams become the terrible and horrible dream virtually.

✓ Yes, I think that every dream I have when I am sleeping always has meaning. For example, when I am very panicked, my dreams become terrible and horrible.

Tense and verb form errors: 'felt when I am sleeping' mixes past and present—use present 'have' for recurring dreams. 'Is always has' is redundant and ungrammatical; use 'always has'. 'I'm so panic' should be 'I am very panicked' or 'I panic'. 'Become the terrible and horrible dream virtually' is awkward; simplify to 'become terrible and horrible'. Suggestion: keep consistent present tense for habitual experiences and choose correct adjective/adverb forms. Grammar problem type id:6

× If I feel calm, I think that I saw the beautiful few in my dream.

✓ If I feel calm, I think that I see beautiful things in my dream.

'I saw' mixes past with conditional present—use 'I see' to match 'If I feel calm'. 'the beautiful few' is incorrect; use 'beautiful things' or 'beautiful scenes'. Suggestion: match tense in conditional sentences and use correct nouns instead of 'few'. Grammar problem type id:13

× Yes, actually I would like to make my dreams come true, especially that if dream relate to the something that happened and make it feel happiness.

✓ Yes, actually I would like to make my dreams come true, especially if the dream relates to something that happened and makes me happy.

Verb form and agreement errors: 'if dream relate' should be 'if the dream relates' (subject-verb agreement). 'make it feel happiness' is ungrammatical; use 'makes me happy' or 'brings happiness'. Suggestion: ensure verbs agree with their subjects and use natural expressions like 'makes me happy'. Grammar problem type id:8},{