Mirrors— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence (e.g., “Not really, I don’t often look at myself in the mirror.”), correct tense and grammar, avoid repetition, and add one specific supporting detail using a linking word (e.g., “because…” or “so…”). Keep it within 2–4 sentences.

Exemplo: Not really — I don’t often look at myself in the mirror. I usually only check briefly when I’m washing my face or fixing my hair, maybe a few times a day, because I prefer to get ready quickly and not spend much time on my appearance.

Sugestão: Provide a clear topic sentence and one brief reason to make the answer more complete. Correct small errors (remove “1” and refine phrasing). Use a linking word (e.g., “because” or “so”) to connect the reason.

Exemplo: No, I’ve never bought a mirror. All the mirrors I need are already at home, such as the bathroom mirror, so I’ve never felt the need to buy an extra one.

Sugestão: Good concise response. To improve further, start with a topic sentence then add a brief specific example and a linking word to show reason or preference. Keep it natural and within two sentences.

Exemplo: No, I don’t carry a physical mirror. Instead, I use my phone’s front camera when I’m out because it’s more convenient and serves the same purpose.

Sugestão: Avoid repetition and informal fillers. Begin with a clear topic sentence (e.g., “No, I wouldn’t use mirrors as decoration.”), then give a specific reason with linking words (e.g., “because…”). Use more natural vocabulary (e.g., “creepy” instead of “scary”) and limit to 2–3 sentences.

Exemplo: No, I wouldn’t use mirrors to decorate my room because I find them a bit creepy at night. For example, if I woke up in the middle of the night, reflections could make the room feel unsettling, so I prefer other decorations like pictures or plants.

× Not really. I only glanced at the mirror when I was when I am washing my face or fixing my hair, maybe several times a day.

✓ Not really. I only glance at the mirror when I am washing my face or fixing my hair, maybe several times a day.

The sentence mixes past and present tenses ('glanced' and 'am washing') causing inconsistency. Use present simple 'glance' with 'when I am washing' to describe habitual action. Suggestion: keep tense consistent for routines by using present simple ('I glance') or present continuous where appropriate.

× I've never felt the need to buy an extra 1 for myself.

✓ I've never felt the need to buy an extra one for myself.

The digit '1' is inappropriate in this context; it should be the word 'one'. This is an article/word choice error. Use 'one' to refer to an additional item in informal speech.

× No, I don't carry a physical one around. I just use the front camera on my phone if I need to check my appearance when I'm out.

✓ No, I don't carry a physical one around. I just use the front camera on my phone if I need to check my appearance when I'm out.

This sentence is grammatically correct. It uses present simple for habitual action and present continuous 'I'm out' appropriately. No change required.

× I wouldn't do that. I think it's kind of scary.

✓ I wouldn't do that. I think it's kind of scary.

Sentence is correct: 'wouldn't' expresses preference/hypothetical choice and 'think' states opinion. No change needed.

× You know, midnight, you wake up, you use the restroom and those mirrors.

✓ You know, at midnight you might wake up, go to the restroom, and see those mirrors.

Original is informal and awkwardly ordered. 'Midnight' needs a preposition 'at', and sequence of actions should use consistent modal/tense. Using 'might wake up' expresses possibility; 'go to the restroom' is the correct verb phrase; 'see those mirrors' clarifies the reaction. This fixes missing preposition (also relates to present tense/modal usage).

× Yeah, I think scary.

✓ Yeah, I think it's scary.

Missing subject and linking verb: 'I think scary' is ungrammatical. Add 'it's' (it is) to form a complete clause 'I think it's scary.' This corrects sentence structure and present tense usage.