Mirrors— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Focus on clarity, grammar and conciseness. Start with a clear topic sentence (Yes/No + frequency), avoid redundant phrases and filler words, and correct verb forms and prepositions (e.g., “look at myself,” “check my appearance,” “when I go out”). Use one supporting detail with a linking word. Keep answer under 4–5 sentences.

Exemplo: Yes, I often look at myself in the mirror, especially before I go out. For instance, if I have a job interview, I always check my hair and clothes to make sure I look professional. This helps me feel more confident.

Sugestão: Correct vocabulary and grammar: say “I bought a large mirror” or “I have a large mirror.” Use appropriate articles and plural/singular agreement (e.g., “living room,” “looks” → “look,” “for events”). Provide a concise reason why you bought it using a linking phrase like “because” or “so that.”

Exemplo: Yes, I bought a large mirror for my home. It is in the living room so everyone can check their appearance before going out, which helps us look presentable for events.

Sugestão: Be concise and grammatically correct. Use one clear reason with a linking word (e.g., “because” or “so”). Avoid repetition and filler words. Correct phrases like “take a mirror with me,” “technology has expanded,” and “use my smartphone camera as a mirror.”

Exemplo: No, I don't usually carry a mirror because smartphone cameras serve the same purpose. For example, I often use my phone to check my outfit since it is convenient and portable.

Sugestão: Organize ideas: give a clear topic sentence, then one or two specific supporting points with linking words. Use correct vocabulary (e.g., “decorate,” “reflects personality,” “placed in the bathroom,” “full-length mirror”) and avoid repetitions. Mention a specific benefit of using mirrors as decoration.

Exemplo: Yes, I would use mirrors to decorate my room because they can make the space look larger and reflect my personal style. For example, a full-length mirror by the wardrobe helps me check my outfit and adds light to the room.

× To be honest, I really look myself in a mirror.

✓ To be honest, I really look at myself in a mirror.

The verb 'look' requires the preposition 'at' when referring to seeing oneself. Use 'look at myself' rather than 'look myself'. Also 'in a mirror' is correct location. Suggestion: use 'look at myself in a mirror'.

× I usually take my appearance whenever I go for an out, uh, an important events or occasion.

✓ I usually check my appearance whenever I go out for an important event or occasion.

Word choice and quantifier errors: 'take my appearance' is incorrect; 'check my appearance' is appropriate. 'Go for an out' is incorrect; use 'go out'. 'An important events' mixes singular and plural; choose 'an important event' or 'important events'. Suggestion: use 'check my appearance whenever I go out for an important event or occasion'.

× For example, if I'm going for an interview, I'll probably check my hair and clothes before leaving the home.

✓ For example, if I'm going to an interview, I'll probably check my hair and clothes before leaving home.

Use 'going to an interview' rather than 'going for an interview'. 'Leaving home' typically omits 'the'. Tense and modal use are fine; minor preposition/article corrections improve naturalness.

× Yes, I have lived in big mirror in my home.

✓ Yes, I have a large mirror in my home.

The original uses incorrect verb 'have lived in' and article usage. Use 'I have a large mirror' to indicate possession. 'Big mirror' is better as 'large mirror'. The present perfect 'have' + noun indicates ownership here.

× It is in living hall where everybody can check their appearance whenever they go out or any events and occasions, make sure they looks presentable and need for that events.

✓ It is in the living room where everybody can check their appearance before going out or to any events and occasions to make sure they look presentable and have what they need for those events.

Multiple preposition and agreement issues: use 'the living room' not 'living hall'; 'before going out' is natural; 'to any events' fits; 'make sure they look' (not 'looks'); 'need for that events' should be 'have what they need for those events'. Also plural agreement corrected.

× To be honest, I don't need to take a mirror with myself because nowadays these are technology has expand rapidly so we can check our outfit from use of smartphone from the camera which will definitely be as and you I mean use as an mirror.

✓ To be honest, I don't need to take a mirror with me because technology has expanded rapidly, so we can check our outfit using a smartphone camera, which can definitely serve as a mirror.

Pronoun 'with myself' is awkward; use 'with me'. 'These are technology has expand' is ungrammatical: use 'technology has expanded'. 'Check our outfit from use of smartphone from the camera' should be 'using a smartphone camera'. 'Serve as a mirror' is natural. Suggestions: simplify sentences and maintain subject-verb agreement.

× Umm, it is easy and portable as well as it works in multiple tasks to perform.

✓ It is easy and portable, and it can be used for multiple purposes.

Awkward phrasing 'works in multiple tasks to perform' should be 'used for multiple purposes'. Use conjunction 'and' and modal 'can' for ability. Keep sentence concise.

× Yes, definitely. I think mirror reflects our personality also sometimes if we decode in our rooms, not only in a living hall, umm, in normal people at home, the mirror is usually keeps in an bathroom to check their face.

✓ Yes, definitely. I think a mirror reflects our personality, and sometimes we place them in our rooms. At home, people usually keep a mirror in the bathroom to check their face.

Article and quantifier errors: 'I think mirror' needs an article 'a mirror'. 'If we decode' is incorrect; use 'we place them'. 'Not only in a living hall' awkward; 'At home, people usually keep a mirror in the bathroom' is natural. Also correct 'keeps' to 'keep' for plural subject 'people'.

× But if we put in I, I mean if we umm put them in our room then it will show our full appearance wherever we go out.

✓ But if we put one in our room, it will show our full appearance before we go out.

Pronoun and phrasing issues: 'put in I' is incorrect; use 'put one'. 'Them' mismatches singular 'a mirror'. 'Wherever we go out' is unnatural; use 'before we go out'. Keep subject-verb agreement and pronoun consistency.