Mirrors— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Speak more fluently by removing filler words (uh) and combine ideas into a concise response with a clear topic sentence and one supporting detail. Use a linking phrase to connect frequency and reason. Also avoid repeating words (e.g., “too much time”).

Exemplo: Yes, I do. I usually check myself in the mirror every morning and before I go out, because I want to make sure I look neat and presentable.

Sugestão: Correct small grammar and remove fillers and repetition. Start directly with a clear topic sentence, then provide one specific reason. Use correct article and count agreement (a mirror, mirrors) and avoid repeating words.

Exemplo: No, I haven't. My family has always bought mirrors for the house, so I have never needed to purchase one myself.

Sugestão: Fix grammatical errors and avoid hesitations. Give a concise topic sentence and one clear supporting detail. Use linking words to explain how you check your appearance when out. Replace unclear phrasing (“you who use”) with correct structure.

Exemplo: No, I don't. If I need to check my appearance when I'm outside, I usually use my phone's front camera.

Sugestão: Remove fillers and correct word choice and grammar (e.g., “wear design” is incorrect; use “do” or “use for decoration”; use plural or articles correctly). Start with a clear opinion sentence and follow with specific reasons, linked logically.

Exemplo: Yes, I would. I would use mirrors for decoration because they make a room look brighter, create a sense of space, and can be an attractive focal point.

× No, I have not Uh, my family has always bought mirror for our home so I have never never needed to purchase one.

✓ No, I have not. Uh, my family has always bought mirrors for our home, so I have never needed to purchase one.

The singular noun 'mirror' should be plural 'mirrors' because it refers to more than one mirror in the general statement about the family purchasing them; this is an article/number issue. Also remove the duplicated 'never' and add necessary punctuation. Suggestion: use plural nouns when speaking about items bought repeatedly or for multiple rooms and proofread for repeated words.

× Oh no I don't. I usually you who use the mirror on my phone's front camera if I need to check my appearance while I am outside.

✓ Oh no, I don't. I usually use the mirror on my phone's front camera if I need to check my appearance while I am outside.

The phrase contains an extraneous fragment 'you who' that disrupts the sentence and misuses pronouns. Remove the stray words so the subject 'I' and verb 'use' are clear. Suggestion: read sentences aloud to catch accidental insertions and ensure subject and verb are correct.

× Oh yes, I would uh, wear design. Mirror can make a room look brighter, more spacious, and more attractive, so I think it's a good decorative item.

✓ Oh yes, I would, uh, choose a decorative design. A mirror can make a room look brighter, more spacious, and more attractive, so I think it's a good decorative item.

'Wear design' is an incorrect collocation; one does not 'wear' a design when referring to decorating. Changing to 'choose a decorative design' or 'use a decorative design' fixes the verb-choice error. Also add the article 'A' before 'mirror' because we refer to a singular countable noun in general. Suggestion: use appropriate verbs for actions (choose/use for decor) and include articles with singular countable nouns.