Mirrors— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be direct, use correct grammar, and keep it concise (max 5 sentences). Start with a clear topic sentence that answers the question, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid repetition and fix tense and article errors.

Exemplo: Yes, I do look at myself in the mirror, but not very often. As a busy grade 12 student, I usually check my reflection only after showering to wash my face or fix my hair. Occasionally I glance at the mirror before leaving for school to make sure I look presentable.

Sugestão: Answer directly and use accurate vocabulary (mirror, not mural/board confusion). Use linking words to organize ideas and give clear examples. Keep sentences grammatical and concise.

Exemplo: Yes, I have bought mirrors before. For school I own a small, portable mirror that fits in my bag for quick checks, and at home I bought a large wall mirror for dressing and grooming.

Sugestão: Clarify your meaning and use correct sentence structure. State whether you usually carry a mirror, then give one or two clear reasons with specific examples. Avoid vague or confusing clauses.

Exemplo: Yes, I usually carry a small mirror in my bag because it helps me check for any visible injuries or fix my makeup when I cannot see myself directly. For instance, I used it once to check a small cut after I bumped into a desk at school.

Sugestão: Give a direct answer and support it with clear reasons. Use linking words (because, so, therefore) and correct phrasing (in my room). Keep it natural and concise.

Exemplo: No, I wouldn't usually use mirrors to decorate my bedroom. I prefer placing mirrors in the bathroom because it is practical for grooming, and a large mirror in the bedroom can feel odd unless it matches the decor.

× Maybe sometimes.

✓ Maybe sometimes I do.

Sentence lacks a main verb; context requires a present-tense response. Add 'I do' to form a complete present-tense sentence. Suggestion: Use a subject and present-tense verb to complete short answers (e.g., 'Sometimes I do').

× As I am a grade 12 student, I have no time to pay more attention to my appearance every day.

✓ As I am a grade 12 student, I don't have time to pay much attention to my appearance every day.

Use contracted negative present ('don't have') and the correct quantifier 'much' with uncountable noun 'attention'. 'Pay more attention' is acceptable but 'pay much attention' fits negative context better. Suggestion: Use 'don't have' for present negative and choose appropriate quantifier ('much' for uncountable nouns).

× So sometimes when I after taking shower I will wash my face so at that time I will look at the mirror.

✓ So sometimes after taking a shower I wash my face, and at that time I look in the mirror.

Use the gerund phrase 'after taking a shower' without extra 'I'. Use simple present 'wash' for habitual actions rather than 'will'. Use 'look in the mirror' (preposition 'in'). Include article 'a' before 'shower'. Suggestion: For routines use simple present and correct prepositions and articles.

× Of course I'd love to board mirrors of any size.

✓ Of course I'd love to buy mirrors of any size.

'Board' is incorrect verb choice; likely intended 'buy'. Use 'buy' to express purchasing. Contraction 'I'd' (I would) is acceptable for polite preference. Suggestion: Choose verbs that match meaning; 'buy' for purchasing.

× For example when I go to school I need to bring some murals, very small to convenient to take it and have a look.

✓ For example, when I go to school I need to bring a small mirror that is convenient to carry and look into.

'Murals' is the wrong noun; should be 'mirror'. Use singular 'a small mirror' for a portable item. Use 'carry' instead of 'take it' and 'look into' as a correct verb phrase. Reworded for clarity and correct grammar. Suggestion: Use the correct noun 'mirror', appropriate articles, and clearer relative clause structure.

× And sometimes at home I will buy a big mirror.

✓ And sometimes at home I buy a big mirror.

For habitual actions, use simple present rather than 'will'. 'Will' implies future rather than habitual purchasing. Suggestion: Use simple present to describe usual habits.

× Of course, I think the mirror is one of the most necessary things in our daily life.

✓ Of course, I think the mirror is one of the most necessary things in our daily life.

Sentence is grammatically correct; no change needed. (Kept for completeness.) Suggestion: None.

× Like when we heard somewhere we cannot see by eyes, so we can through the mirror and saw where we hurt.

✓ For example, when we hear about a place we cannot see with our own eyes, we can use a mirror to see where we are hurt.

Original has tense and structure errors: 'heard somewhere' is vague and wrong tense; 'cannot see by eyes' should be 'cannot see with our own eyes'; 'so we can through the mirror and saw' mixes forms. Use 'use a mirror to see' and maintain present tense. Suggestion: Keep consistent present tense, use 'use' for instrument, and correct phrasing 'see with our eyes'.

× And I think that bring more.

✓ And I think it is more useful.

Original is ungrammatical fragment. 'That bring more' lacks subject and verb agreement and unclear meaning. Replaced with clear, grammatical expression conveying usefulness. Suggestion: Use a clear subject and verb; restate intended meaning ('more useful' or 'more helpful').

× MMM maybe I don't put them in my rooms, but I put them in the bathroom because I think mirrors in the room is so strange and something in the bathroom is reasonable.

✓ Maybe I don't put them in my bedroom, but I put them in the bathroom because I think mirrors in the bedroom are strange while mirrors in the bathroom are reasonable.

Use 'bedroom' instead of plural 'rooms' for personal space; maintain subject-verb agreement 'mirrors ... are strange'. Replace 'something in the bathroom is reasonable' with clearer contrast 'mirrors in the bathroom are reasonable'. Use simple present for habits. Suggestion: Ensure noun choice (bedroom), plurality agreement, and clear comparative phrasing.