Teacher— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid repetition (e.g., 'teach me a lot of skill' → 'taught me many skills'). Use correct verb forms and articles.

Exemplo: My favourite teacher was my high school English teacher. She helped me build confidence by encouraging us to speak in every lesson and giving gentle, specific corrections, which improved my fluency and reduced my fear of making mistakes.

Sugestão: Correct grammar and reduce redundancy. Use a clear topic sentence and one or two specific examples of what you discuss. Replace vague phrases like 'guideline of my life pathway' with more natural expressions such as 'advice about study and careers.' Use linking words (for example, 'for instance' or 'because').

Exemplo: Yes, I still keep in touch with a couple of my primary school teachers. For instance, we exchange updates about our jobs and families, and they often give me practical advice about studying and career choices, which I really appreciate.

Sugestão: Use correct tense and smoother phrasing; add one specific example of a method she used. Begin with a topic sentence, then give a concrete detail and a brief result. Use linking words like 'because' or 'as a result.'

Exemplo: She helped me become more confident in speaking English by encouraging frequent practice in class and giving gentle, specific corrections. For example, she used pair-work activities that allowed me to practise speaking without fear, and as a result my fluency improved noticeably.

Sugestão: Clarify and simplify your answer. Use a clear topic sentence (Yes/No + brief reason), then one specific reason. Avoid unclear phrases like 'teach the lodge' and correct grammar ('patient enough' not 'patient in love').

Exemplo: No, I don't plan to become a teacher because I don't have a subject I feel passionate about teaching. Also, I'm not sure I have the patience for working with young children, so I prefer to pursue a different career.

× My favorite teacher is my English teacher in the high school and I'm not really confident in speaking English, but she is always nice to teach me a lot of skill and give me guidelines and help me to build confidence in speaking.

✓ My favorite teacher was my high school English teacher, and I'm not very confident speaking English, but she was always kind, taught me many skills, gave me guidelines, and helped me build confidence in speaking.

Issues: incorrect preposition 'in the high school' should be 'high school' as an adjective phrase; 'nice to teach me' is incorrect collocation—use 'kind' and verbs like 'taught'; 'a lot of skill' should be 'many skills' (quantifier and count noun); parallel verb forms require past tense to match context and consistent verb forms ('gave' and 'helped'); remove unnecessary preposition 'to' in 'help me build'. Suggestion: use correct adjective order, countable quantifiers, consistent tense and parallel verbs.

× Yes, there are still a couple of primary school teacher that I still keep in touch with them.

✓ Yes, there are still a couple of primary school teachers that I keep in touch with.

Problems: 'primary school teacher' should be plural 'teachers' (number agreement); 'keep in touch with them' is redundant because 'with' already requires an object—use 'that I keep in touch with' or 'whom I keep in touch with'. Also 'there are' is acceptable for existence but better to match plurality. Suggestion: pluralize nouns and avoid redundant pronouns.

× We always update our current life and also about our study or jobs.

✓ We always update each other about our lives and about our studies or jobs.

Problems: 'update our current life' is unnatural—use 'update each other about our lives'; 'study' as countable context should be plural 'studies' or 'our education'. Suggestion: use 'update each other about' and plural nouns when referring to multiple people.

× And I love to maintain a good relationship with them because I feel like they are not only a teacher of me but they are also the friends and also give me a lot of guideline of my life pathway.

✓ I like to maintain a good relationship with them because I feel they were not only my teachers but also my friends, and they gave me a lot of guidance about my life path.

Problems: 'a teacher of me' is incorrect pronoun order—use 'my teachers'; plural agreement 'the friends' should be 'my friends'; 'give me a lot of guideline' should be 'gave me a lot of guidance' (uncountable noun and past tense to match context); 'life pathway' is better as 'life path'. Suggestion: use correct possessive pronouns, plural agreement, and appropriate uncountable nouns.

× She taught me to be confident when speaking English. I used to worried about making mistakes but she encouraged us to speak a lot in lessons and gently correct areas which helped me to improve more fast.

✓ She taught me to be confident when speaking English. I used to worry about making mistakes, but she encouraged us to speak a lot in lessons and gently corrected areas, which helped me improve faster.

Problems: 'used to worried' mixes 'used to' with past participle—should be 'used to worry' or 'was worried'; 'gently correct areas' requires past tense 'corrected'; 'improve more fast' is ungrammatical—use comparative adverb 'faster' or 'more quickly'. Suggestion: keep consistent past tense, use correct verb forms after 'used to', and use adverbial comparatives correctly.

× I do not plan to be a teacher in the future because there is no specific subject that I really want to investigate and teach the lodge for my student, and I am also not confident that I'm patient in love for teaching little students, but many of my friends love to become a teacher.

✓ I do not plan to be a teacher in the future because there is no specific subject I want to specialize in and teach to my students, and I am not confident that I am patient or suited to teaching young children, but many of my friends want to become teachers.

Problems: 'investigate and teach the lodge for my student' is incorrect wording—use 'specialize in and teach to my students'; 'patient in love for teaching' is ungrammatical—use 'patient or suited to teaching'; 'little students' better as 'young children' or 'young students'; 'love to become a teacher' should be 'want to become teachers' for agreement. Suggestion: use natural collocations for careers ('specialize in'), correct idioms ('suited to'), and plural agreement.