Teacher— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Try to make your answer more fluent and natural by avoiding hesitations and repetitions. Use clear and complete sentences, and provide specific details about why you liked your teacher. For example, mention what made her teaching special or how she helped you learn.

Exemplo: Yes, I have a favourite teacher from my primary school. She was my science teacher, and I admired her because she explained difficult concepts very clearly. Even now, I keep in touch with her because she inspired me a lot.

Sugestão: Improve your answer by correcting grammar and sentence structure. Avoid unnecessary repetition and use linking words to make your answer coherent. Also, provide specific details about your relationship with the teacher.

Exemplo: Yes, I am still in touch with my primary school teacher, Ankita, who lives close to my hometown. Recently, I got married and invited her to the wedding ceremony, where we had a wonderful time catching up.

Sugestão: Try to avoid hesitations and incomplete sentences. Provide clear and specific examples of how your teacher helped you, and use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

Exemplo: My favourite teacher helped me in many ways. For example, she provided detailed notes that made studying easier. Moreover, she patiently explained difficult concepts until I understood them fully.

Sugestão: Work on sentence clarity and grammar. Express your ideas clearly and use linking words to connect your reasons. Also, avoid vague phrases and be specific about your motivation and qualities.

Exemplo: Yes, I would like to become a teacher in the future because I was inspired by my primary school teacher, whom I admired greatly. Additionally, I believe I have the confidence and knowledge required to teach effectively.

× I clearly remembered that when I was in, in my primary school at that time.

✓ I clearly remember that when I was in my primary school at that time.

The verb 'remembered' is in the past tense, but the context suggests a present recollection, so the present tense 'remember' is appropriate.

× Actually she is.

✓ Actually, she is.

A comma is needed after 'Actually' to separate the introductory word from the main clause for correct sentence structure.

× She was a very good teacher and have a profound knowledge regarding the science objective, but I also connected nowadays with her.

✓ She was a very good teacher and had profound knowledge regarding the science subject, and I am also connected with her nowadays.

The verb 'have' should be 'had' to agree with the past tense 'was'. 'Science objective' is incorrect; it should be 'science subject'. Also, 'connected nowadays' needs 'am' to form present tense and 'with' to indicate connection.

× I'm still in touch with the my primary school teacher.

✓ I'm still in touch with my primary school teacher.

The definite article 'the' is unnecessary before 'my'; using both together is incorrect.

× Actually her name is Ankita who lives a stone throw away from my hometown.

✓ Actually, her name is Ankita, who lives a stone's throw away from my hometown.

A comma is needed after 'Actually' and before 'who' to separate clauses. Also, the phrase is 'a stone's throw away' with possessive form.

× Recently I got a marriage and married and I invited her in in my in my marriage ceremony and we met.

✓ Recently, I got married and invited her to my marriage ceremony, and we met.

The phrase 'got a marriage' is incorrect; 'got married' is correct. Also, 'invited her in in my in my marriage ceremony' is redundant and incorrect; it should be 'invited her to my marriage ceremony'.

× I clearly remember did when I was in my primary school at that time, uh, she helped a lot by providing, uh, me such, uh, notes, uh, which helped a lot.

✓ I clearly remember that when I was in my primary school, she helped a lot by providing me with notes, which helped a lot.

The phrase 'remember did' is incorrect; 'remember that' is correct. Also, 'providing me such notes' should be 'providing me with notes'.

× Apart from this, uh, she also cleared all the concepts in.

✓ Apart from this, she also cleared all the concepts for me.

The sentence ends abruptly with 'in'; it needs an object or preposition to complete the meaning.

× Yes, definitely I would like to become a teacher in the coming years because first of all I inspired from my primary teacher home I loved a lot.

✓ Yes, definitely I would like to become a teacher in the coming years because, first of all, I am inspired by my primary teacher whom I loved a lot.

The verb 'inspired' needs to be in passive form 'am inspired by'. Also, 'home' is incorrect; it should be 'whom' to refer to the teacher.

× Apart from this, I think that I have such capabilities in myself to become a teacher because I'm a confident person as well as a profound knowledge.

✓ Apart from this, I think that I have the capability to become a teacher because I'm a confident person and have profound knowledge.

'Capabilities in myself' is incorrect; 'capability' is better. Also, 'a profound knowledge' is incorrect; 'profound knowledge' is uncountable and does not take 'a'. The conjunction 'as well as' is better replaced with 'and' here.