Teacher— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 你的回答表达了对老师的喜爱，但语言不够自然，有语法错误和重复用词。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并使用更准确的形容词。

Exemplo: Yes, my favourite teacher was my Chinese teacher in junior high school. She was sometimes strict, but very kind and supportive.

Sugestão: 回答内容较完整，但可以使用更多连接词使句子更流畅，同时注意表达的准确性。

Exemplo: Yes, I am still in touch with my Chinese teacher from junior high school because I often ask her for help with my college homework. Moreover, since I study education, we sometimes collaborate on projects.

Sugestão: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清的问题，建议使用更简单明确的句子，并正确使用时态和词汇。

Exemplo: We keep in touch through Instagram, and I usually ask her if she has time to help me with my homework. We also discuss the problems together online.

Sugestão: 回答不够连贯，语法和词汇使用不准确。建议组织清晰的句子，表达对教师职业的看法。

Exemplo: Yes, I want to be a teacher in the future because many of my teachers were kind and helpful, even if they were sometimes strict. They supported me not only in studies but also in life.

× I very like like her and sometimes she is seriously, but she really nice.

✓ I like her very much and sometimes she is serious, but she is really nice.

这里“very like like”是不正确的表达，应该用“like her very much”来表达喜欢的程度；“she is seriously”中的“seriously”是副词，应该用形容词“serious”来描述人的状态；“she really nice”缺少动词“is”，应为“she is really nice”。

× sometimes she is seriously, but she really nice.

✓ sometimes she is serious, but she is really nice.

“seriously”是副词，不能用来形容人，应使用形容词“serious”；“she really nice”缺少系动词“is”，应为“she is really nice”。

× I'm still in touch with my Chinese teacher from UMM junior high school because I often need her help with my homework in college.

✓ I'm still in touch with my Chinese teacher from UMM junior high school because I often need her help on my homework in college.

英语中“help”后面通常搭配介词“on”表示在某事上提供帮助，而不是“with”。

× I will automatically to find her and ask her whether she have the time to help me to deal with my homework or not and we also vision on it.

✓ I will automatically find her and ask her whether she has the time to help me deal with my homework or not, and we also have video calls about it.

“she have”主谓不一致，单数第三人称应为“she has”；“to find”中“to”多余，应直接用动词原形“find”；“help me to deal”中“to”可省略；“we also vision on it”表达不清，推测为“我们也通过视频交流”，应改为“we also have video calls about it”。

× ask her whether she have the time to help me to deal with my homework or not

✓ ask her whether she has the time to help me deal with my homework or not

第三人称单数时，动词“have”应变为“has”。

× They are very nice, maybe they sometimes seriously, but they really help me very much.

✓ They are very nice, maybe sometimes they are serious, but they really help me very much.

“sometimes seriously”中“seriously”是副词，描述人的状态应使用形容词“serious”，且缺少系动词“are”。