Teacher— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 回答中存在语法错误和用词不当，如“postgraduate survive”应为“postgraduate studies”，“charming people”应为“a charming person”。建议注意语法准确性和词汇的正确使用，同时回答应更简洁自然。

Exemplo: Yes, my favorite teacher is my postgraduate tutor because she is very kind and always gives me helpful advice.

Sugestão: 回答表达不清晰，语法错误较多，如“didn't keep touched”应为“haven't kept in touch”，“we will get strange”应为“we will become strangers”。建议加强语法练习，表达时注意句子完整和逻辑连贯。

Exemplo: No, I am not in touch with my primary school teachers because I think we have grown apart over time.

Sugestão: 回答中语法和表达不准确，如“supposed to and hard warm”不符合语法，且表达不清。建议使用清晰的句子结构，具体说明老师如何帮助自己。

Exemplo: She helped me improve my academic performance and guided me in conducting interesting research by giving useful advice.

Sugestão: 回答较为自然，但“something holy and needed”表达稍显生硬。建议使用更地道的表达方式，丰富词汇，增强表达的自然性和说服力。

Exemplo: Yes, I have always dreamed of becoming a college teacher because I believe education is important and rewarding.

× Yes, I think my favorite teacher is my tutor in my postgraduate survive because she is a charming people and often tell me so much to help me.

✓ Yes, I think my favorite teacher is my tutor in my postgraduate study because she is a charming person and often tells me so much to help me.

“people”是复数形式，表示“人们”，这里应使用单数“person”表示“一个人”。“tell”应与单数主语“she”保持一致，改为“tells”。“survive”是错误单词，应为“study”，表示“学习”。

× Yes, I think my favorite teacher is my tutor in my postgraduate survive because she is a charming people and often tell me so much to help me.

✓ Yes, I think my favorite teacher is my tutor in my postgraduate study because she is a charming person and often tells me so much to help me.

主语“she”是第三人称单数，谓语动词“tell”应加-s，变为“tells”，以保持主谓一致。

× No, because I think the time has passed away. So since I leave the primary school I didn't keep touched with anyone because I think we will get strange and.

✓ No, because I think the time has passed away. So since I left primary school I haven't kept in touch with anyone because I think we will become strangers.

“leave”应使用过去式“left”，因为动作发生在过去。“didn't keep touched”结构错误，应为“haven't kept in touch”，表示从过去到现在的持续状态。

× No, because I think the time has passed away. So since I leave the primary school I didn't keep touched with anyone because I think we will get strange and.

✓ No, because I think the time has passed away. So since I left primary school I haven't kept in touch with anyone because I think we will become strangers.

“keep touched with”是不正确的搭配，正确表达是“keep in touch with”，表示保持联系。

× No, because I think the time has passed away. So since I leave the primary school I didn't keep touched with anyone because I think we will get strange and.

✓ No, because I think the time has passed away. So since I left primary school I haven't kept in touch with anyone because I think we will become strangers.

“strange”是形容词，表示“陌生的”，这里应使用名词复数“strangers”，表示“陌生人”。

× I think she helps me both in academic performance and doing some intriguing research because my teacher is often supposed to and hard warm and she often give some useful advice for me.

✓ I think she helps me both in academic performance and in doing some intriguing research because my teacher is often supportive and hardworking and she often gives some useful advice to me.

“supposed to and hard warm”表达错误，应为“supportive and hardworking”，表示“支持的和勤奋的”。“give some useful advice for me”中介词应为“to”，即“give advice to someone”。

× I think she helps me both in academic performance and doing some intriguing research because my teacher is often supposed to and hard warm and she often give some useful advice for me.

✓ I think she helps me both in academic performance and in doing some intriguing research because my teacher is often supportive and hardworking and she often gives some useful advice to me.

主语“she”是第三人称单数，谓语动词“give”应加-s，变为“gives”，以保持主谓一致。

× I think she helps me both in academic performance and doing some intriguing research because my teacher is often supposed to and hard warm and she often give some useful advice for me.

✓ I think she helps me both in academic performance and in doing some intriguing research because my teacher is often supportive and hardworking and she often gives some useful advice to me.

“both in academic performance and doing some intriguing research”中应保持结构一致，改为“both in academic performance and in doing some intriguing research”，使两个并列部分结构对称。

× Yeah, being a college teacher is always my dream. I think this occupation is promising and excellent because education is something holy and needed.

✓ Yeah, being a college teacher has always been my dream. I think this occupation is promising and excellent because education is something holy and needed.

“is always my dream”时态不准确，表达持续的梦想应使用现在完成时“has always been”。

× Yeah, being a college teacher is always my dream. I think this occupation is promising and excellent because education is something holy and needed.

✓ Yeah, being a college teacher has always been my dream. I think this occupation is promising and excellent because education is something sacred and necessary.

“holy”通常用于宗教语境，表达“神圣的”，此处用“sacred”更合适；“needed”是过去分词，形容词用法不自然，改为“necessary”更准确。