Teacher— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“can always make the tallest topic interesting”应为“could always make the most difficult topics interesting”。建议注意时态一致性和词汇搭配，避免重复表达“he also can make everything fun”。

Exemplo: Yes, my favorite teacher was my high school history teacher. He had a great sense of humor and could always make the most difficult topics interesting. He supported me a lot in my history studies, which helped me perform well in tests.

Sugestão: 回答表达较为清晰，但存在语法和用词错误，如“lost contact with them since I graduated”应为“have lost contact with them since I graduated”，以及“more than 10 years until now”应为“more than 10 years ago”。建议注意时态和介词的正确使用。

Exemplo: Unfortunately, I have lost contact with them since I graduated from primary school more than 10 years ago. However, I still remember their kindness and patience during my early education, and I feel very lucky to have met them.

Sugestão: 回答中语法错误较多，如“he was always encouraged us”应为“he always encouraged us”，以及表达不够清晰“come from my shy shyness”应为“overcome my shyness”。建议加强语法准确性和表达的清晰度。

Exemplo: The biggest help from my favorite teacher was improving my public speaking skills. He always encouraged us to share our opinions in class, which made everyone feel comfortable. This really helped me overcome my shyness.

Sugestão: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然，如“used to do a a tutoring”应为“used to do tutoring”，以及“need to teaching”应为“need to teach”。建议注意动词形式和句子结构的正确使用，同时避免重复和冗余。

Exemplo: Not really. I appreciate and respect teachers, but I used to do tutoring at school and saw how challenging the job is. Teachers not only need to teach students but also manage many other responsibilities.

× He had a real sense of humor and can always make the tallest topic interesting.

✓ He had a real sense of humor and could always make the dullest topic interesting.

这里时态是过去时，前半句用的是过去时态'had'，后半句用现在时态'can'不一致，应改为过去时态'could'。另外，'tallest'用错了，应该是'dullest'（无聊的）来形容话题。

× He supports me a lot in history study so I did well in the history test and he also can make everything fun.

✓ He supported me a lot in history study so I did well in the history test and he also could make everything fun.

前半句用过去时态'did'，说明整个叙述是过去的事情，'supports'和'can'应改为过去时态'supported'和'could'，保持时态一致。

× Unfortunately not, I just lost contact with them since I graduated from my primary school.

✓ Unfortunately not, I just lost contact with him since I graduated from my primary school.

前文提到的是单数的'primary school teacher'，代词应使用单数'him'，而不是复数'them'。

× It's more than 10 years until now, but I can still recall their kindness and patience during my early education years, so I feel really lucky to meet them.

✓ It's been more than 10 years until now, but I can still recall their kindness and patience during my early education years, so I feel really lucky to have met them.

'It's more than 10 years until now'表达不自然，应该用现在完成时'It's been more than 10 years'。'to meet them'应改为完成时态'to have met them'，表示过去的经历。

× During his class he was always encouraged us to share our opinions and make the class and everyone feel comfortable about that.

✓ During his class he always encouraged us to share our opinions and make the class and everyone feel comfortable about that.

'was always encouraged us'结构错误，动词'encourage'是主动语态，应该用'subject + always encouraged'，而不是被动语态。

× That really helps me to come from my shy shyness.

✓ That really helps me to overcome my shyness.

'come from my shy shyness'表达不正确，应该用'overcome my shyness'表示克服害羞。

× Not really, I really appreciate and respect teachers but because I used to do a a tutoring at school and I've seen how challenging this teacher job.

✓ Not really, I really appreciate and respect teachers but because I used to do tutoring at school and I've seen how challenging this teaching job is.

'a a tutoring'重复且错误，'tutoring'不可数名词不需要冠词。'this teacher job'表达不自然，应改为'this teaching job'。

× So they not only need to teaching students but also need to managing many things.

✓ So they not only need to teach students but also need to manage many things.

'need to'后面应接动词原形，不能用动名词'teaching'和'managing'。