Teacher— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Try to make your answer more natural and concise by avoiding redundancy and improving sentence structure. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and provide clearer explanations.

Exemplo: Yes, my favourite teacher is Mr. Hussain, who taught us mathematics last year. He was impressive because he explained difficult topics like derivatives and integration clearly, which helped me understand them better.

Sugestão: Avoid repetition and improve fluency by removing filler words. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide more specific details about your relationship with the teacher.

Exemplo: Yes, I still keep in touch with some of my primary school teachers because they taught us not only academic subjects but also good manners and respect. For instance, I often message Mr. Anna, my favourite English teacher, who I really admire.

Sugestão: Make your answer more coherent by using linking words and correcting sentence structure. Be specific about how the teacher helped and what you are doing now.

Exemplo: My favourite teacher helped me improve my English significantly. When I first emigrated, my English was weak; however, thanks to his patient teaching and encouragement, I strengthened my language skills. Now, I feel confident and am actively applying to universities.

Sugestão: Avoid repetition and filler words. Use linking words to connect your ideas clearly and express your opinion more naturally.

Exemplo: I don't want to be a teacher in the future because it is a very exhausting job. Instead, I plan to study aerospace engineering and become an engineer. However, I really appreciate teachers because they are patient and supportive.

× He taught us mathematics last year on our education.

✓ He taught us mathematics last year during our education.

The preposition 'on' is incorrectly used here. The correct preposition to indicate a period or duration is 'during'. So, 'during our education' is appropriate.

× they taught us not only academic subjects, but that but but they taught us good manners and respect.

✓ they taught us not only academic subjects, but also good manners and respect.

The phrase 'not only... but also' is the correct correlative conjunction pair. The original sentence has repeated 'but' and an unnecessary 'that', which is incorrect.

× I often message one of one of my favorite teachers named Mr. Anna.

✓ I often message one of my favorite teachers named Mr. Anna.

The phrase 'one of one of' is redundant. Only one 'one of' is needed to indicate a member of a group.

× He taught us English subject and I really like.

✓ He taught us the English subject and I really like it.

The sentence is missing the definite article 'the' before 'English subject' and the pronoun 'it' after 'like' to complete the thought.

× But by the last year of my education, because of his support, I now feel confident I am actively seeking a university to.

✓ But by the last year of my education, because of his support, I felt confident and actively sought a university to attend.

The sentence mixes past and present tenses incorrectly. Since it refers to the last year of education (past), past tense verbs 'felt' and 'sought' should be used. Also, 'to' is incomplete and should be followed by 'attend'.

× I don't, I don't think so because it's a very exhausted job.

✓ I don't, I don't think so because it's a very exhausting job.

The adjective 'exhausted' describes a person who is tired, while 'exhausting' describes something that causes tiredness. Here, the job causes tiredness, so 'exhausting' is correct.

× But I really appreciate the teachers because they tie up with us and, uh, they are patient with us.

✓ But I really appreciate the teachers because they connect with us and, uh, they are patient with us.

The phrase 'tie up with us' is incorrect in this context. The correct expression is 'connect with us' to indicate building a relationship or bond.