Part 1
Examinador
Do you have a favourite teacher?
Candidato
Yes, I do have a favorite teacher, three EE, my English teacher, because we make lesson every interesting.
Examinador
Are you still in touch with your primary school teacher?
Candidato
Yes, I am still in touch with my primary school teacher. She was very keen and supportive with making a lasting importance on me.
Examinador
In what way did your favourite teacher help you?
Candidato
My favorite teacher help me experiment this lead by otherwise I can run me to believe in the abilities symbols.
Examinador
Do you want to be a teacher in the future?
Candidato
Yes, I would like to be a teacher in the future because I enjoy helping other alone and grow teacher allow me to share no longer and make a positive impact on a student's lives.
Do you have a favourite teacher?
Pontuação: 40.0Sugestão: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và tự nhiên hơn. Bạn nên sử dụng cấu trúc câu đúng ngữ pháp và tránh lỗi chính tả, đồng thời trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi với câu chủ đề rõ ràng. Ví dụ, bạn có thể nói về lý do tại sao bạn thích giáo viên đó một cách cụ thể và mạch lạc.
Exemplo: Yes, I have a favourite teacher, my English teacher, because she makes every lesson very interesting and easy to understand.
Are you still in touch with your primary school teacher?
Pontuação: 50.0Sugestão: Bạn nên sử dụng từ ngữ chính xác và câu văn mạch lạc hơn. Hãy tránh dùng những cụm từ không tự nhiên như "making a lasting importance on me" và thay vào đó giải thích rõ hơn về mối quan hệ hoặc ảnh hưởng của giáo viên đó.
Exemplo: Yes, I am still in touch with my primary school teacher. She was very kind and supportive, and she had a lasting impact on my life.
In what way did your favourite teacher help you?
Pontuação: 20.0Sugestão: Câu trả lời của bạn không rõ nghĩa và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi với câu chủ đề rõ ràng, sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp và giải thích cụ thể cách giáo viên giúp bạn.
Exemplo: My favourite teacher helped me improve my confidence and skills by encouraging me to participate in class activities and believe in my abilities.
Do you want to be a teacher in the future?
Pontuação: 30.0Sugestão: Bạn cần sử dụng câu văn rõ ràng và chính xác hơn. Tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không phù hợp. Hãy trình bày lý do bạn muốn trở thành giáo viên một cách mạch lạc và có liên kết logic giữa các ý.
Exemplo: Yes, I would like to be a teacher in the future because I enjoy helping others and want to make a positive impact on students' lives.
× Yes, I do have a favorite teacher, three EE, my English teacher, because we make lesson every interesting.
✓ Yes, I do have a favorite teacher, three EE, my English teacher, because we make every lesson interesting.
The phrase 'make lesson every interesting' is incorrect because 'every' should modify 'lesson' and 'interesting' should describe the lesson. The correct order is 'every lesson interesting'. This is an issue of adjective and adverb placement.
× She was very keen and supportive with making a lasting importance on me.
✓ She was very keen and supportive in making a lasting impression on me.
The phrase 'supportive with making a lasting importance on me' is incorrect. The correct preposition is 'in' after 'supportive', and 'lasting importance' should be 'lasting impression' to convey the intended meaning. This is an incorrect use of prepositions and word choice.
× My favorite teacher help me experiment this lead by otherwise I can run me to believe in the abilities symbols.
✓ My favorite teacher helped me experiment, which led me to believe in my abilities.
The original sentence is unclear and grammatically incorrect. 'Help' should be in past tense 'helped' to match the context. The phrase 'experiment this lead by otherwise I can run me to believe in the abilities symbols' is confusing and incorrect. The corrected sentence clarifies the meaning and corrects verb tense and sentence structure.
× Yes, I would like to be a teacher in the future because I enjoy helping other alone and grow teacher allow me to share no longer and make a positive impact on a student's lives.
✓ Yes, I would like to be a teacher in the future because I enjoy helping others alone, and being a teacher allows me to share knowledge and make a positive impact on students' lives.
The sentence has multiple issues: 'helping other alone' should be 'helping others alone'; 'grow teacher allow me' is incorrect and should be 'being a teacher allows me'; 'share no longer' is unclear and corrected to 'share knowledge'; 'a student's lives' should be 'students' lives' to indicate plural. The modal verb 'would like' is correct, but the rest of the sentence needs correction for clarity and grammar.