Teacher— Part 1 Relatório
Conversa
Part 1
Examinador
Do you have a favourite teacher?
Candidato
Yes, of course. My favorite teacher is my university professor. He's a filming class teacher. Also, he is an editor. Many of his works are adapted into films and serious works. Also, he has a lot of professional skills and is very friendly. I love him very much.
Examinador
Are you still in touch with your primary school teacher?
Candidato
Well, actually not, because at that time we were too young to have our own mobile phone, so it was so difficult for us to remember all of people's phone number, which caused this situation that we couldn't touch with them now.
Examinador
In what way did your favourite teacher help you?
Candidato
Well, actually he gives me a lot of opportunities. For example, last term he asked me to attend his own projects, which could help me to exercise my professional skills. Also in the daily study, if I have some difficulties, I could ask him.
Examinador
Do you want to be a teacher in the future?
Candidato
Well, actually not, because almost all of my family members are teachers, my mom primary school teachers and my father a math teacher. So I think if I become a teacher, my life is too predictable.
Avaliação
Total
Part 1
Do you have a favourite teacher?
Pontuação: 75.0Sugestão: 回答中信息丰富，但表达略显重复，且句子较多，建议简化句子结构，避免重复使用“also”，使表达更自然流畅。
Exemplo: Yes, my favorite teacher is my university professor who teaches filming. He is also an editor, and many of his works have been adapted into films. Besides his professional skills, he is very friendly, which makes me admire him a lot.
Are you still in touch with your primary school teacher?
Pontuação: 65.0Sugestão: 回答较长且表达不够简洁，语法和用词有误，建议简化句子，使用更准确的表达，如“keep in touch”，并注意时态和词汇的正确使用。
Exemplo: No, I'm not still in touch with my primary school teacher because we were too young to have mobile phones back then, so it was hard to keep their contact information.
In what way did your favourite teacher help you?
Pontuação: 80.0Sugestão: 回答内容具体且有例子，但句子结构稍显简单，建议使用更多连接词使表达更连贯，同时注意时态一致性。
Exemplo: My favorite teacher has helped me in many ways. For instance, last term he invited me to participate in his projects, which helped me improve my professional skills. Moreover, I can always ask him for help whenever I face difficulties in my studies.
Do you want to be a teacher in the future?
Pontuação: 70.0Sugestão: 回答表达了观点，但语法和句子结构有误，建议调整句子顺序，使用更准确的表达，并丰富理由使回答更有说服力。
Exemplo: No, I don't want to be a teacher because most of my family members are teachers, like my mother who teaches primary school and my father who is a math teacher. I feel that if I become a teacher, my life might be too predictable and lack variety.
Gramática
× Many of his works are adapted into films and serious works.
✓ Many of his works are adapted into films and series.
这里'serious works'应为'series'，表示电视剧系列。'serious'是形容词，不能用作名词，且语境中应指影视作品系列。
× we couldn't touch with them now.
✓ we couldn't get in touch with them now.
动词'touch'后面不能直接加'with'表示联系，应使用短语'get in touch with'表示保持联系。
× he gives me a lot of opportunities.
✓ he gave me a lot of opportunities.
根据上下文，描述的是过去发生的事情，动词应使用过去时态。
× he asked me to attend his own projects, which could help me to exercise my professional skills.
✓ he asked me to attend his own projects, which could help me exercise my professional skills.
动词'exercise'后不需要加'to'，'help'后面接动词原形或动名词均可，但此处更自然用原形。
× my mom primary school teachers and my father a math teacher.
✓ my mom is a primary school teacher and my father is a math teacher.
此处缺少动词'is'，且'mom'后应为单数职业名词'teacher'，保持主谓一致。
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