Teacher— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is generally clear and relevant, but there are some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing that affect naturalness. For example, "she pretends she patiently explains difficult concept" is unclear and incorrect. Also, try to use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly. Aim to keep your answer concise and avoid redundancy.

Exemplo: Yes, my favourite teacher is my English instructor because she always encourages me by providing constructive feedback and believes in my potential. For example, she patiently explains difficult concepts, which helps me understand the material better. I really appreciate her kindness and dedication, as they make learning enjoyable.

Sugestão: Your answer addresses the question well, but there are some grammatical mistakes and awkward expressions, such as "she frequently asked me" (should be present tense) and "what's the new things I am learning" (should be "what new things I am learning"). Also, try to use linking words to improve coherence and avoid minor redundancy.

Exemplo: Yes, I'm still in touch with my primary school teacher through Instagram. We often chat, and she frequently asks me about my life and the new things I am learning. Maintaining this connection is important because she had a big influence on my early education.

Sugestão: Your answer is clear, well-structured, and relevant. To improve further, you could add linking words to connect your ideas more smoothly and include a bit more specific detail or example to enrich your response.

Exemplo: When I was at school, I struggled to understand some subjects. However, my favourite teacher helped me by providing clear examples and explaining concepts in a simple way. Because of her support, I improved my understanding and became more confident in my studies.

Sugestão: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors and awkward phrasing, such as "I choose is the science background" and repeated words "I'm I'm". Try to organise your ideas more clearly and use linking words to improve coherence. Also, avoid redundancy and keep your answer concise.

Exemplo: I have changed my plans because I am not in my home country anymore. Initially, I decided to become a teacher and chose a science background. However, now I am working as an office administrator in a trucking company, so I probably won't become a teacher in the near future.

× For instance, she pretends she patiently explains difficult concept which helped me to understand the material better.

✓ For instance, she patiently explains difficult concepts which helped me to understand the material better.

The word 'pretends' is incorrect here because it implies she is only pretending to explain, which changes the meaning. Also, 'concept' should be plural 'concepts' to match the context. The verb 'explains' is correctly in the present tense to describe a habitual action.

× For instance, she pretends she patiently explains difficult concept which helped me to understand the material better.

✓ For instance, she patiently explains difficult concepts which helped me to understand the material better.

The noun 'concept' should be plural 'concepts' because it refers to multiple difficult ideas, not just one.

× We often chat there and she frequently asked me about my life and what's the new things I am learning.

✓ We often chat there and she frequently asks me about my life and what new things I am learning.

The verb 'asked' should be in the present tense 'asks' to agree with 'often chat' and 'frequently', indicating habitual action. Also, 'what's the new things' is incorrect; it should be 'what new things' without 'the'.

× We often chat there and she frequently asked me about my life and what's the new things I am learning.

✓ We often chat there and she frequently asks me about my life and what new things I am learning.

The phrase 'the new things' is incorrect here because 'new things' is a general plural noun phrase and does not require the definite article 'the'.

× As I'm not in my home country so I have changed my plan.

✓ As I'm not in my home country, I have changed my plan.

The conjunction 'so' is redundant after 'As'. Also, a comma is needed after the introductory clause for clarity.

× Initially I have decided to become a teacher that's why I choose is the science background.

✓ Initially, I decided to become a teacher; that's why I chose the science background.

The present perfect 'have decided' should be simple past 'decided' to indicate a completed action in the past. 'Choose' should be past tense 'chose'. The phrase 'choose is the science background' is incorrect; it should be 'chose the science background'.

× Initially I have decided to become a teacher that's why I choose is the science background.

✓ Initially, I decided to become a teacher; that's why I chose the science background.

The sentence is a run-on and lacks proper punctuation. It should be split into two clauses with a semicolon or period for clarity.

× But now I have changed my stream and I'm I'm working as an office administrator in a trucking company so probably not now.

✓ But now I have changed my stream and I'm working as an office administrator in a trucking company, so probably not now.

The repeated 'I'm' is a typographical error and should be corrected to a single 'I'm'. Also, a comma is needed before 'so' to separate the clauses properly.