Birthday— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is a bit unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to form complete sentences and avoid redundancy. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. For example, start with a clear topic sentence, then add details about how you celebrate with friends and family.

Exemplo: On my birthday, I usually pray to God and then celebrate with my friends and family. We spend time together, enjoy good food, and have a lot of fun.

Sugestão: Your answer lacks clarity and has grammatical mistakes. Use past tense consistently and provide more specific details. Also, use linking words to make your answer coherent.

Exemplo: When I was young, I used to invite my friends to my birthday party, and we celebrated at summer resorts. It was always a joyful time with lots of games and activities.

Sugestão: Your answer is confusing and contains many errors. Try to express your opinion clearly with correct grammar. Use linking words to explain reasons logically and avoid redundancy.

Exemplo: Yes, I believe it is important to celebrate my birthday because it happens only once a year. Celebrating this special occasion allows me to reflect on my life and enjoy time with loved ones.

Sugestão: Your answer is unclear and off-topic. Try to directly answer the question with a clear opinion and supporting details. Avoid irrelevant or confusing statements.

Exemplo: In China, I think the most important birthday to celebrate is that of the President, as it is a significant national event that many people recognize.

× I prayed to God and. Celebrate my birthday with my friends and families and have a great pleasure on that today.

✓ I prayed to God and celebrated my birthday with my friends and family and had great pleasure on that day.

The sentence mixes past and present tense incorrectly. 'Celebrate' should be in past tense 'celebrated' to match 'prayed'. 'Families' should be singular 'family' as it refers to a group. 'Have' should be 'had' to maintain past tense. 'On that today' is incorrect; 'on that day' is appropriate for past events.

× I called some of my friends to my birthday party and celebrate my birthday all summer resorts.

✓ I called some of my friends to my birthday party and celebrated my birthday at summer resorts.

The verb 'celebrate' should be in past tense 'celebrated' to match 'called'. The preposition 'at' is correct for locations like 'summer resorts'. 'All summer resorts' is unclear; 'at summer resorts' is more appropriate.

× Yes, I think that it is important for me to celebrate my birthday because it comes only in ones in our life in here. So it is really important and celebrating her birthday is survey very extreme occasion.

✓ Yes, I think that it is important for me to celebrate my birthday because it comes only once in our life. So it is really important and celebrating your birthday is surely a very special occasion.

'Ones' should be 'once' to indicate frequency. 'In here' is unnecessary and incorrect. 'Her birthday' should be 'your birthday' to refer to the person speaking. 'Survey' is a mispronunciation or misspelling of 'surely'. 'Very extreme occasion' is unnatural; 'very special occasion' is better.

× I think that their president of China I don't know about so much. About birthday. I'm in China, so I think that the present is the control. Power adapter.

✓ I think that the president of China is important. I don't know much about birthdays in China, but I think the president is the central power figure.

'Their president' should be 'the president' to refer specifically. The sentence is fragmented and unclear; it needs restructuring. 'Present' is a mishearing or typo for 'president'. 'Control power adapter' is incorrect and likely a misinterpretation; 'central power figure' is appropriate.