Birthday— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Jawaban Anda kurang jelas dan tidak terstruktur dengan baik. Cobalah untuk memberikan kalimat topik yang jelas dan mendukung dengan detail spesifik. Gunakan kalimat yang lengkap dan hindari pengulangan atau kalimat yang tidak selesai.

Exemplo: I usually don't celebrate my birthday in a big way. I prefer to spend the day quietly with my close friends, doing simple activities like going out for a meal or watching a movie together.

Sugestão: Jawaban Anda kurang jelas dan banyak kesalahan tata bahasa. Cobalah untuk membuat kalimat yang lengkap dan jelas, serta gunakan kata penghubung untuk menghubungkan ide-ide Anda.

Exemplo: When I was young, my parents usually organized a small party at home. My cousins, brothers, and sisters would come to celebrate my birthday together, and we would enjoy games and cake.

Sugestão: Jawaban Anda sudah mengandung opini, tetapi kalimatnya kurang terstruktur dan ada kesalahan tata bahasa. Cobalah untuk membuat kalimat yang lebih jelas dan gunakan kata penghubung untuk menghubungkan ide Anda.

Exemplo: I don't think it is necessary to celebrate my birthday every year because I believe we should be grateful every day. For me, every day is special as long as I am with the people I love.

Sugestão: Jawaban Anda kurang jelas dan tidak terstruktur dengan baik. Cobalah untuk memberikan pendapat yang lebih spesifik dan gunakan kalimat lengkap dengan kata penghubung agar lebih koheren.

Exemplo: I think the most important birthday to celebrate in China might be the president's birthday because it is a national event and many people participate in the celebrations.

× I'm not a person that usually celebrate my birthday

✓ I'm not a person that usually celebrates my birthday

The subject 'person' is singular, so the verb should be in the third person singular form 'celebrates' instead of 'celebrate'. In English, verbs in the present tense add an 's' for third person singular subjects.

× so when it comes to my party, I just do it.

✓ so when it comes to my party, I just have it.

The phrase 'I just do it' is vague and unclear in this context. The correct expression is 'I just have it' to indicate holding or having a party. This improves clarity and sentence structure.

× Like my regular day to my word go with my friends and yeah, I receive a lot of. Celebrating.

✓ Like a regular day, I go out with my friends and yeah, I receive a lot of celebrations.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. Correcting it to a complete sentence with proper structure improves understanding. 'Like a regular day' sets the context, and 'I go out with my friends' is a clear action. 'Receive a lot of celebrations' completes the thought.

× my parents even chili. Make a party for my college and my. Brother and sisters to come along at my house to celebrate my birthday together.

✓ My parents even cooked chili and made a party for my college friends and my brothers and sisters to come along to my house to celebrate my birthday together.

The original sentence is fragmented and has missing verbs and unclear phrases. 'Even chili' is unclear; likely meant 'cooked chili'. 'Make a party' should be 'made a party'. 'Brother and sisters' should be plural 'brothers and sisters'. 'Come along at my house' should be 'come along to my house'. Correcting these improves clarity and grammar.

× So I'm not that kind of person because. For me, every day is special. As long as I with someone I love.

✓ So I'm not that kind of person because, for me, every day is special as long as I am with someone I love.

The sentence is fragmented and missing the verb 'am' after 'I'. 'As long as I with someone I love' is incomplete; it should be 'As long as I am with someone I love'. Adding the verb completes the sentence and corrects the pronoun usage.

× That's a really hard question because right now I don't really have no leads about China, but I think the president.

✓ That's a really hard question because right now I don't really have any leads about China, but I think the president.

The phrase 'don't really have no leads' is a double negative and incorrect. It should be 'don't really have any leads'. Also, 'the president' is incomplete and unclear, but since the instruction is to correct only grammar mistakes from the list, this is acceptable. Correcting the double negative improves grammar.