Birthday— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn. Bạn nên sử dụng câu chủ đề để trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng sai, đồng thời sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời tự nhiên và logic hơn.

Exemplo: On my birthday, I usually go to school because it often falls on a weekday. After classes, I return home and celebrate with my family.

Sugestão: Bạn cần chú ý phát âm và ngữ pháp để câu trả lời dễ hiểu hơn. Hãy sử dụng câu chủ đề rõ ràng và bổ sung chi tiết cụ thể, sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

Exemplo: When I was young, my whole family celebrated my birthday at my grandparents' house. We had dinner together, chatted, and I received gifts that made me very happy.

Sugestão: Bạn nên sử dụng cấu trúc câu rõ ràng và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp. Hãy trình bày ý kiến của bạn một cách mạch lạc, sử dụng liên từ để kết nối các ý và làm câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

Exemplo: I think it depends on my mood. When I was young, I really enjoyed celebrating my birthday, but now that I am older, I prefer not to have a big celebration.

Sugestão: Bạn nên cố gắng trả lời câu hỏi thay vì hỏi lại giám khảo. Nếu không biết, bạn có thể nói rõ điều đó và đưa ra ý kiến cá nhân hoặc dự đoán. Hãy sử dụng câu đơn giản, đúng ngữ pháp và tránh hỏi lại giám khảo.

Exemplo: I am not sure whose birthday is the most important to celebrate in China, but I think the Chinese New Year is a very important festival for everyone.

× When is comes to birthday I would say that I usually go to school because my birthday are usually on the daily day an I have to go to school then I go to the extract classes and then I go home and have us more birthday.

✓ When it comes to my birthday, I would say that I usually go to school because my birthday is usually on a weekday and I have to go to school. Then I go to the extra classes and then I go home and have more birthday celebrations.

The sentence contains errors in present tense usage such as 'is comes' instead of 'it comes', and subject-verb agreement with 'birthday are' instead of 'birthday is'. Also, 'daily day' is incorrect; 'weekday' is appropriate. Correcting these improves clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× When I worry all my family celebrated my birthday party at my grandparent has an they an we had dinner together and chat sit together.

✓ When I was young, all my family celebrated my birthday party at my grandparents' house and we had dinner together and chatted together.

The sentence misuses 'worry' instead of 'was young' and has incorrect verb forms like 'chat sit' instead of 'chatted'. Also, 'grandparent has an they an' is unclear and corrected to 'grandparents' house'. These corrections fix past tense and sentence structure errors.

× Then they give me a prison that they had a prepare and we will happy to get her.

✓ Then they gave me a present that they had prepared and we were happy to get it.

The verbs 'give' and 'prepare' need to be in past tense 'gave' and 'prepared' to match the past context. 'Prison' is a wrong word; it should be 'present'. 'We will happy' is incorrect; it should be 'we were happy'. These corrections fix past tense and vocabulary errors.

× I see it depends on my AH because when I was young I really like to be celebrated my birthday party, but now, right now when I grow up more, I don't like to celebrate my birthday anymore.

✓ I see it depends on my age because when I was young I really liked to celebrate my birthday party, but now, as I have grown up, I don't like to celebrate my birthday anymore.

The sentence has tense inconsistencies: 'I really like' should be 'I really liked' to match past time. 'Be celebrated' is incorrect; it should be 'celebrate'. 'Grow up more' is awkward; 'have grown up' is better. These corrections improve tense consistency and verb usage.

× Sorry but I don't have any more information about her. Who's birdie icing is the most important to celebrate in China? Can you give me a example?

✓ Sorry, but I don't have any more information about that. Whose birthday is the most important to celebrate in China? Can you give me an example?

The sentence has errors in pronoun use ('her' should be 'that'), spelling ('birdie icing' should be 'birthday'), and article use ('a example' should be 'an example'). These corrections fix sentence structure and vocabulary errors.