Internet— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: まず、最初に直接質問に答える簡潔な主文（トピックセンテンス）を作り、その後で必要ならば具体的な補足説明を付けてください。文法と語順の誤りを修正し、冗長な語や不自然な表現を減らすことでより自然に聞こえます。例えば「I started using the internet when I was about eight or nine years old.」のように短くはっきり述べ、その後に「I first learned about it at school, but I actually began using it at home.」と続けると良いです。

Exemplo: I started using the internet when I was about eight or nine years old. I first learned about it at school, but I actually began using it at home with my family.

Sugestão: 答えは頻度を明確に示し、その理由を論理的につなげて説明してください。現在の回答は冗長で不明瞭な表現が多く、文法も不安定です。接続詞（for example, because, so）や短い理由文を使って一貫性を持たせることが必要です。例えば「I go online every day, usually several times an hour, because I need the internet for work and to stay in touch with people.」のように言い換えてください。

Exemplo: I go online every day, usually several times an hour, because I need the internet for work and to keep in touch with friends and news.

Sugestão: 直接的な主文で答えた後、具体的な状況と結果をつなげて説明してください。現在の回答は伝えたい内容はあるが語法と時制に誤りがあります。例えば過去形や正しい語順を使い、「My parents sometimes banned me from using the internet because I would spend too much time playing games.」のように簡潔に述べ、その後に「They even changed the settings to limit access to study-related sites.」と補足すると良いです。

Exemplo: Yes, I can. My parents sometimes banned me from using the internet because I spent too much time playing games or chatting. They even changed the Wi‑Fi settings so I could only access study-related sites.

Sugestão: 肯定か否定かをはっきり述べ、その理由を論理的に示してください。文法（時制・主語と動詞の一致）や語彙の選び方を整えると良いです。例えば「Yes, I do. I spend a lot of time online, but much of it is necessary for my job.」とし、必要ならば具体的な割合や活動を追加してください。

Exemplo: Yes, I do. I spend a lot of time online, but much of it is necessary because my job requires research and communication over the internet.

Sugestão: 仮定の話は条件文やwouldを正しく使って表現し、自然な語順で伝えてください。現在の回答は意図は伝わるものの語法が不自然です。例えば「If I were somewhere without the internet, I would read a book. When I get absorbed in a book, I often forget about being online.」のように言い換えると良いです。

Exemplo: If I were somewhere without the internet, I would read a book. When I get absorbed in reading, I usually forget about the online world.

× I'm not remembering clearly, but for my. Sent memory.

✓ I don't remember clearly, but from my memory,

Use simple present 'don't remember' for states rather than present continuous 'I'm not remembering'. Also the fragment 'for my. Sent memory.' is incorrect; combine into 'from my memory' for clarity.

× I remember I used I started to use Internet around 8 or 9 years old also.

✓ I remember I started to use the internet when I was around eight or nine years old.

Original has redundant verbs and wrong word order ('used I started to use'). Use 'started to use' or 'began using' and include 'when I was' for age. 'Internet' needs 'the' (article error) and numbers are written in words in formal speech.

× Of course I have learned in school but I started in house.

✓ Of course I learned about it at school, but I started at home.

Use 'learned about it at school' and 'at home' (correct preposition). 'I have learned' can be simplified to 'I learned' to fit narrative. 'In house' is incorrect; use 'at home'.

× Every day and almost every hour without connected I can't do any job and having a chat with today's world in currency.

✓ I go online every day and almost every hour; if I'm not connected I can't do my work and can't keep up with current conversations.

Original has missing subjects and verbs, wrong forms ('without connected', 'having a chat with today's world in currency'). Use 'if I'm not connected' and 'can't do my work' and 'keep up with current conversations'. Also 'currency' is wrong word; use 'current' or 'current events'.

× Be hungry, connected with face to face Commission.

✓ I feel lost without it; I miss face-to-face communication.

Original is fragmentary and unclear ('Be hungry, connected with face to face Commission'). Rephrase to express the intended meaning: feeling deprived and missing in-person interaction.

× My parents sometimes prohibited to use Internet because I immersed in the game or chatting with friends.

✓ My parents sometimes prohibited me from using the internet because I was immersed in games or chatting with friends.

Use 'prohibited me from using' (correct verb pattern) and past continuous 'was immersed' to describe repeated past behaviour. 'Internet' needs 'the' and plural/singular consistency ('games').

× Sometimes they uh, changes the setting of the Internet uh to only I can do study.

✓ Sometimes they changed the internet settings so that I could only study.

'They changes' is wrong subject-verb agreement; use 'they changed'. Use 'so that I could only study' to express purpose/limitation. 'The' before 'internet' and 'settings' plural are standard.

× Yes I do. I over connected with Internet I think but I not hardest it.

✓ Yes, I do. I'm too often connected to the internet, I think, but I don't find it too hard.

Use present continuous 'I'm too often connected' or 'I connect too much'. 'Over connected' is not natural. 'I not hardest it' is ungrammatical; replace with 'I don't find it too hard'.

× I think it's necessary time and tasks for me because my job have to use Internet.

✓ I think it's necessary for my work because my job requires using the internet.

Use 'necessary for my work' and 'my job requires' (subject-verb agreement) and 'using the internet' as gerund. 'Have to use' should be 'requires using' or 'requires me to use'.

× When I call the place where I cannot use Internet, I start to reading a book.

✓ When I go to a place where I cannot use the internet, I start reading a book.

Use 'go to a place' instead of 'call the place'. After 'start' use the -ing form 'start reading', not 'start to reading'. Also add 'the' before 'internet'.

× When I immersed in reading book, I would forget the online connected world.

✓ When I'm immersed in reading a book, I forget the online world.

Use present simple 'I forget' to describe habitual action when immersed; 'When I immersed' is incorrect form. Use 'I'm immersed' or 'when I'm immersed' and 'reading a book' with article 'a', and 'online world' is clearer than 'online connected world'.