Internet— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 回答较自然且内容完整，但“monumental day”表达稍显书面化，建议使用更口语化的表达，并且可以稍微丰富细节。

Exemplo: I started using the internet in 2006 when my parents bought our first family computer. It was really exciting because it opened up a whole new world for me.

Sugestão: 回答内容较好，但句子结构稍显复杂且有语法错误（如“have some spare time immerse myself in”），建议简化句子并注意语法。

Exemplo: I usually go online several times a day, especially when I feel stressed from studying or have some free time. The internet helps me relax and take a break.

Sugestão: 回答中时态使用不当（应为过去时），且内容较简单，建议使用正确时态并增加具体细节。

Exemplo: Yes, I remember when I was preparing for my college entrance exam, my parents didn't allow me to use the internet much because it could distract me from studying.

Sugestão: 回答偏离问题焦点，没有直接回答是否花太多时间上网，且有语法错误（如“contact with”应为“contact”），建议直接回答问题并注意语法。

Exemplo: Yes, I think I spend too much time online because I use the internet for chatting with friends and paying bills, so it's hard to avoid being online for long periods.

Sugestão: 回答内容具体且结构清晰，但“do some researches”应改为“do some research”，建议注意单复数形式。

Exemplo: Without the internet, it would be harder to do research or talk to my tutors online. I would have to spend more time traveling to the library to find books.

× Generally, I go online many times a day, especially when I feel stressed about my academic life or have some spare time immerse myself in.

✓ Generally, I go online many times a day, especially when I feel stressed about my academic life or have some spare time to immerse myself in.

句子中缺少不定式to，导致动词不定式结构不完整。正确用法是“have some spare time to immerse myself in”，表示“有一些空闲时间去沉浸于”。

× I still vividly remembered that it was a time when I was preparing for my college entrance exam.

✓ I still vividly remember that it was a time when I was preparing for my college entrance exam.

句子中使用了过去时“remembered”，但表达的是现在仍然记得的事实，应该用现在时“remember”。

× We need to use our mobile phones to contact with our friends or pay the bills, which makes the Internet necessary for us.

✓ We need to use our mobile phones to contact our friends or pay the bills, which makes the Internet necessary for us.

动词contact后不需要介词with，直接加宾语即可。错误使用了“contact with”，应改为“contact”。

× I think without the Internet, there would be challenges for us to do some researches or consult with our tutors online.

✓ I think without the Internet, there would be challenges for us to do some research or consult with our tutors online.

research作为不可数名词，不能用复数形式“researches”，应使用单数形式“research”。