Internet— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is relevant but could be more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy and improve grammar, for example, say "I started using the internet in class 8 because I needed help with my homework, so I asked my mum for her phone to find useful information."

Exemplo: I started using the internet in class 8 because I needed help with my homework, so I asked my mum for her phone to find useful information for my studies.

Sugestão: Your answer is clear but could be more natural and grammatically correct. Use linking words and avoid awkward phrasing. For example, "I go online almost every day because it's the best way to find useful information and improve my skills academically and personally."

Exemplo: I go online almost every day because it's the best way to find useful information and improve my skills academically and personally.

Sugestão: Your answer has some grammar mistakes and unclear parts. Try to be more precise and coherent. For example, "I couldn't use the internet in high school because it wasn't widely available and technology was less developed back then, so I had to find information for my studies in other ways."

Exemplo: I couldn't use the internet in high school because it wasn't widely available and technology was less developed back then, so I had to find information for my studies in other ways.

Sugestão: Your answer is unclear and contains grammar errors. Be more direct and use linking words to balance your opinion. For example, "Yes, I spend a lot of time online. While it benefits daily life, it also has drawbacks that sometimes outweigh the advantages."

Exemplo: Yes, I spend a lot of time online. While it benefits daily life, it also has drawbacks that sometimes outweigh the advantages.

Sugestão: Your answer is a bit disorganised and has filler words. Try to be clearer and more fluent. For example, "Without the internet, I would prefer reading books carefully because they provide knowledge, enhance vocabulary, and open up diverse worlds and new perspectives."

Exemplo: Without the internet, I would prefer reading books carefully because they provide knowledge, enhance vocabulary, and open up diverse worlds and new perspectives.

× I started using Internet when I was in class 8.

✓ I started using the Internet when I was in class 8.

The word 'Internet' is a singular noun that requires the definite article 'the' before it in English (Australia). Omitting 'the' is incorrect in this context.

× I asked my mom for her cell phone to find information which would helpful for my studies.

✓ I asked my mom for her cell phone to find information which would be helpful for my studies.

The phrase 'would helpful' is missing the verb 'be' to form the correct conditional structure 'would be helpful'. This is necessary to maintain proper verb form and meaning.

× I go online almost every day to find effective information and it also best way to improve my skills both academically and personally.

✓ I go online almost every day to find effective information and it is also the best way to improve my skills both academically and personally.

The sentence is missing the verb 'is' before 'also' and the definite article 'the' before 'best way'. Both are required for correct sentence structure and meaning.

× A time I was not able to use Internet was in high school due to the fact that Internet was not widely available and technology are less developed.

✓ A time I was not able to use the Internet was in high school due to the fact that the Internet was not widely available and technology was less developed.

'Internet' requires the definite article 'the'. Also, 'technology' is a singular noun and should be paired with the singular verb 'was' instead of 'are'.

× Umm, so I can use Internet at that time to find my information for my studies.

✓ Umm, so I could use the Internet at that time to find information for my studies.

The modal verb 'can' is incorrect for past ability; 'could' should be used. Also, 'Internet' requires 'the' and 'my information' can be simplified to 'information' for natural usage.

× Yes, I find myself considering the significant amount of time spending on online UMM, it is very benefit for our daily life, but also it have some drawbacks that outweigh the advantages.

✓ Yes, I find myself spending a significant amount of time online. It is very beneficial for our daily life, but it also has some drawbacks that outweigh the advantages.

The phrase 'time spending on online' is incorrect; it should be 'spending time online'. 'Benefit' should be the adjective 'beneficial'. 'Have' should be 'has' to agree with singular subject 'it'. The sentence was split for clarity.

× Without the Internet, I would prefer umm reading some books uh, with umm prudence, knowledge and enhances vocabulary.

✓ Without the Internet, I would prefer reading some books with prudence, knowledge, and to enhance vocabulary.

After 'would prefer', the verb should be in the '-ing' form, which is correct here. However, 'enhances' is incorrect; it should be 'to enhance' to parallel 'with prudence, knowledge'. Also, filler words like 'umm' and 'uh' are omitted for clarity.

× Also umm, it takes you into a diverse umm world and and new perspectives.

✓ Also, it takes you into a diverse world and new perspectives.

The repeated 'and' is a typographical error and should be corrected to a single 'and'. Filler words 'umm' are removed for clarity.