Internet— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Câu trả lời của bạn cần sử dụng thì đúng hơn và tránh lặp từ không cần thiết. Bạn nên nói rõ hơn về thời điểm bắt đầu sử dụng internet và mục đích sử dụng hiện tại một cách tự nhiên và mạch lạc.

Exemplo: I started using the internet when I was a child. Nowadays, I use it every day for work, entertainment, and to stay connected with friends on Facebook.

Sugestão: Bạn nên trả lời rõ ràng và đầy đủ hơn, tránh lặp từ và sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn. Hãy nói rõ tần suất và các hoạt động bạn làm khi lên mạng.

Exemplo: I go online several times a day, mainly to check Facebook, connect with my friends, shop online, and enjoy entertainment.

Sugestão: Bạn cần cải thiện ngữ pháp và cấu trúc câu để câu trả lời rõ ràng hơn. Hãy sử dụng liên từ để kết nối ý và giải thích lý do một cách mạch lạc.

Exemplo: I remember I wasn't allowed to use the internet during exams at school because it was important to prevent cheating and create a fair environment for all students.

Sugestão: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên diễn đạt ý kiến của mình một cách mạch lạc, tránh lỗi và sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp.

Exemplo: I think I spend too much time online, which is not good for me. However, I enjoy it because it helps me relax and stay informed.

Sugestão: Bạn cần trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi và tránh lặp từ, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và rõ ràng. Hãy nói về những hoạt động bạn sẽ làm nếu không có internet.

Exemplo: Without the internet, I would spend more time reading books, meeting friends in person, and enjoying outdoor activities.

× I start using the Internet when I was a child and now I usually, uh, use Internet everyday for my work, for entertainment and for uh, Facebook.

✓ I started using the Internet when I was a child and now I usually, uh, use the Internet every day for my work, for entertainment and for, uh, Facebook.

The verb 'start' should be in the past tense 'started' to match the past time reference 'when I was a child'. Also, 'Internet' should have the definite article 'the' before it, and 'everyday' should be two words 'every day' when used as an adverb.

× I start using the Internet when I was a child and now I usually, uh, use Internet everyday for my work, for entertainment and for uh, Facebook.

✓ I started using the Internet when I was a child and now I usually, uh, use the Internet every day for my work, for entertainment and for, uh, Facebook.

The noun 'Internet' is a unique entity and requires the definite article 'the' before it in English.

× I often use online multiple in a day, especially I see I see Facebook to connect my friend uh shopping online entertain.

✓ I often go online multiple times a day, especially to see Facebook to connect with my friends, uh, shop online, and for entertainment.

The phrase 'use online' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'go online'. Also, 'multiple' should be followed by 'times' to indicate frequency. 'Connect my friend' should be 'connect with my friends' to use the correct preposition and plural form.

× I often use online multiple in a day, especially I see I see Facebook to connect my friend uh shopping online entertain.

✓ I often go online multiple times a day, especially to see Facebook to connect with my friends, uh, shop online, and for entertainment.

The word 'friend' should be plural 'friends' because it refers to more than one person.

× I often use online multiple in a day, especially I see I see Facebook to connect my friend uh shopping online entertain.

✓ I often go online multiple times a day, especially to see Facebook to connect with my friends, uh, shop online, and for entertainment.

The verb 'connect' requires the preposition 'with' to indicate the relationship between the subject and the object.

× I remember that's a wasn't allowed to use the Internet when I did my exam at school because it was important to prevent testing The rules, UH helped creators a fair environment for all students.

✓ I remember that I wasn't allowed to use the Internet when I took my exam at school because it was important to prevent cheating. The rules helped create a fair environment for all students.

The phrase 'that's a wasn't allowed' is incorrect; it should be 'that I wasn't allowed'. 'Did my exam' should be 'took my exam' as 'take an exam' is the correct collocation. 'Prevent testing' is incorrect; it should be 'prevent cheating'. 'Creators' should be 'create' as the verb form.

× I remember that's a wasn't allowed to use the Internet when I did my exam at school because it was important to prevent testing The rules, UH helped creators a fair environment for all students.

✓ I remember that I wasn't allowed to use the Internet when I took my exam at school because it was important to prevent cheating. The rules helped create a fair environment for all students.

The pronoun 'that's a' is incorrect and should be 'that I'. Also, 'creators' is a noun but the sentence requires the verb 'create'.

× I think I spent too much time online. I knows it is not good for me, but I like. You the time online like a ticket.

✓ I think I spend too much time online. I know it is not good for me, but I like spending time online like a ticket.

The verb 'spent' is past tense but the context is present habitual action, so 'spend' is correct. 'Knows' should be 'know' to agree with the subject 'I'. The phrase 'I like. You the time online like a ticket.' is unclear and corrected to 'I like spending time online like a ticket' for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I think I spent too much time online. I knows it is not good for me, but I like. You the time online like a ticket.

✓ I think I spend too much time online. I know it is not good for me, but I like spending time online like a ticket.

The verb 'knows' is incorrect for the first person singular subject 'I'; it should be 'know'.

× I think I spent too much time online. I knows it is not good for me, but I like. You the time online like a ticket.

✓ I think I spend too much time online. I know it is not good for me, but I like spending time online like a ticket.

The sentence 'but I like. You the time online like a ticket.' is fragmented and unclear. It is corrected to a complete and coherent sentence.

× I thinks nowadays everyone, uh, use Internet, uh, several times or multiple times a day, because Internet is very useful for, uh, everyone. They can't, uh, see Facebook.

✓ I think nowadays everyone, uh, uses the Internet several or multiple times a day because the Internet is very useful for, uh, everyone. They can, uh, see Facebook.

The verb 'thinks' should be 'think' to agree with the first person singular subject 'I'. 'Use' should be 'uses' to agree with the singular subject 'everyone'. The definite article 'the' is needed before 'Internet'. 'Can't' is changed to 'can' to make logical sense in context.