Internet— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is unclear and grammatically incorrect. Try to directly answer the question with a clear topic sentence and avoid unnecessary words. Use past tense consistently and keep your answer concise.

Exemplo: I started using the internet when I was 10 years old. It was my first experience with the internet, and I found it very interesting.

Sugestão: Your answer is confusing and lacks coherence. Use linking words to connect ideas and be specific about your internet usage habits. Also, correct your grammar and sentence structure.

Exemplo: I usually go online when I am free. For example, at 5:00 pm, I love to play games online.

Sugestão: Your answer repeats phrases and has grammatical errors. Try to avoid repetition and use clear, correct sentences. Use linking words to explain reasons.

Exemplo: Yes, I remember a time when my parents did not allow me to use the internet because I had exams. They wanted me to focus on studying.

Sugestão: Your answer is somewhat clear but can be improved by using better linking words and more precise vocabulary. Avoid repeating words and be more specific about your internet usage.

Exemplo: I don't think I spend too much time online because I study from 8:00 AM to 2:00 PM. In the evening, I use the internet for some time after resting.

Sugestão: Your answer is good but a bit repetitive and lengthy. Try to be concise and use linking words to make your answer more coherent. Also, correct minor grammar mistakes.

Exemplo: Without the internet, I would spend more time outdoors playing cricket with my friends, which is my favourite sport. I would also read books during my spare time.

× How did they start using Internet when I was 10 years old and at that time I use Internet for my first time experience.

✓ I started using the Internet when I was 10 years old, and at that time I used the Internet for the first time.

The sentence incorrectly uses 'did they start' which is not appropriate for the first person singular subject 'I'. Also, 'use' should be in past tense 'used' to match the past time reference. The sentence structure is corrected to properly express past actions.

× I often do online when I was free and I usually do not use Internet, but at 5:00 I love to play games then I use Internet and.

✓ I often go online when I am free, and I usually do not use the Internet, but at 5:00 I love to play games, then I use the Internet.

The sentence mixes past tense 'was' with present tense 'often do'. 'Do online' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'go online'. Also, 'Internet' needs the definite article 'the'. The sentence is corrected to present tense to match the question about frequency.

× Yes Sir, I remember a time I was not allowed to use Internet at that time because because of my exams are there so that my parents didn't allow me to use Internet at that time.

✓ Yes Sir, I remember a time when I was not allowed to use the Internet because of my exams, so my parents didn't allow me to use the Internet then.

The sentence has redundant phrases and incorrect tense usage. 'Because of my exams are there' is incorrect; it should be 'because of my exams'. Also, 'Internet' requires the definite article 'the'. The sentence is corrected for clarity and proper past tense usage.

× I did not think that I spent too much time online because from 8:00 AM to 2:00 PM I study, then I sleep. I sleep sometimes and in the evening I use Internet.

✓ I do not think that I spend too much time online because from 8:00 AM to 2:00 PM I study, then I sleep. I sometimes sleep, and in the evening I use the Internet.

The question is about present opinion, so present tense 'do not think' and 'spend' are appropriate. 'Internet' needs the definite article 'the'. The sentence is corrected to present tense to match the question's context.

× There are many things you can do without Internet. I go outside and play with my friends and I play cricket with my friends that is my favorite sports and in in evening I usually play cricket and I did not use Internet and I read books in my spare time.

✓ There are many things you can do without the Internet. I go outside and play with my friends, and I play cricket with them; it is my favorite sport. In the evening, I usually play cricket, and I do not use the Internet. I also read books in my spare time.

'Internet' requires the definite article 'the'. 'Favorite sports' should be singular 'favorite sport' when referring to one sport. 'Did not use' is past tense, but the context is habitual action, so present tense 'do not use' is correct. The sentence is corrected for article use, singular/plural agreement, and tense consistency.