Internet— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 你嘅答案有啲語法錯誤同埋表達唔夠自然，例如「I started using Internet since primary 6」應該用過去式「I started using the Internet in primary 6」。另外，句子有啲冗長同重複，可以簡化同用連接詞令內容更流暢。

Exemplo: I started using the Internet in primary 6 because many of my classmates were on Facebook. Using Facebook helped me stay connected with my friends through chatting and FaceTime.

Sugestão: 你嘅答案有啲重複同語法錯誤，例如「I always use the Facebook or some electronic devices every day」唔夠自然，可以直接講「I go online every day」。另外，內容可以更具體同用連接詞令句子更流暢。

Exemplo: I go online every day, mainly using Facebook and other devices. This helps me stay in touch with my friends and know their thoughts quickly.

Sugestão: 你嘅答案有啲語法錯誤同用詞唔準確，例如「Fall back to my memories」唔自然，可以用「I remember」。另外，句子結構複雜且不流暢，建議簡化並用連接詞。

Exemplo: I remember the last time I wasn't allowed to use the Internet was in primary 3. My mom wanted me to study for an important test on September 6, so she didn't let me go online.

Sugestão: 你嘅答案有啲語法錯誤同表達唔清楚，例如「unlike using those machines」唔合適，可以用「because I use these platforms to...」。建議用更自然嘅句子同連接詞令內容更清晰。

Exemplo: Definitely, I spend too much time on the Internet. I often use Facebook, Instagram, and YouTube because they help me stay in touch with others and keep up with the latest fashion trends.

Sugestão: 你嘅答案內容清晰，但有啲語法錯誤，例如「Having equality times」應該係「spending quality time」。建議用更自然嘅表達同連接詞令句子更流暢。

Exemplo: If there was no Internet, I would spend more time with my family, doing activities like exercising, reading, chatting, or having dinner together. Spending quality time with my family is very important to me.

× I started using Internet since primary 6 as I remembered everyone started to use Facebook in my P6.

✓ I started using the Internet in primary 6 as I remember everyone started to use Facebook in my P6.

使用過去式 'remembered' 不合適，因為此處描述的是一個持續的記憶，應使用現在式 'remember'。另外，'since' 用於表示從過去某時持續到現在，與 'started' 搭配不當，應改為 'in'。此外，'Internet' 前應加定冠詞 'the'。

× I started using Internet since primary 6 as I remembered everyone started to use Facebook in my P6.

✓ I started using the Internet in primary 6 as I remember everyone started to use Facebook in my P6.

'Internet' 是特定名詞，前面應加定冠詞 'the'。

× That's why encourage me to use Facebook on that time.

✓ That's why it encouraged me to use Facebook at that time.

句子缺少主詞 'it'，動詞時態應為過去式 'encouraged'，'on that time' 應改為 'at that time'。

× That's why encourage me to use Facebook on that time.

✓ That's why it encouraged me to use Facebook at that time.

'on' 用於具體日期或星期，表示時間點時應用 'at'。

× Using Facebook helps me to connect with my friends such as chatting with them in the chat room or having FaceTime together through.

✓ Using Facebook helps me connect with my friends, such as chatting with them in the chat room or having FaceTime together.

'through' 在句尾使用不當，應刪除。

× I think I am an online editor.

✓ I think I am an online user.

'editor' 與上下文不符，應使用 'user' 表示使用者。

× I always use the Facebook or some electronic devices every day and every time using those devices helps me to connect with my friends immediately and to know what they are going to think and what they are going to say.

✓ I always use Facebook or some electronic devices every day, and using those devices helps me connect with my friends immediately and know what they are going to think and say.

'Facebook' 為專有名詞，前面不加定冠詞 'the'。

× Also, I may use it to check with my friends as well.

✓ Also, I may use it to check on my friends as well.

'check with' 表示與某人商量，應用 'check on' 表示查看某人狀況。

× Fall back to my memories.

✓ Falling back to my memories.

'Fall back' 應使用現在分詞 'Falling back' 作為句子開頭。

× The last time I was not allowed to use Internet was in primary 3 as I remembered I have to have the mutation on the coming September 6 and my mom needed me to do the revision but I don't want to do so.

✓ The last time I was not allowed to use the Internet was in primary 3 as I remember I had to have the mutation on the coming September 6 and my mom needed me to do the revision but I didn't want to do so.

'Internet' 前應加定冠詞 'the'。時態應保持一致，'remembered' 改為 'remember'，'have' 改為過去式 'had'，'don't' 改為過去式 'didn't'。

× She didn't allow me to use Internet.

✓ She didn't allow me to use the Internet.

'Internet' 前應加定冠詞 'the'。

× I spend too much time on Internet.

✓ I spend too much time on the Internet.

'Internet' 前應加定冠詞 'the'。

× I always spend the time to use the Facebook, Instagram or YouTube, unlike using those machines to get in touch with the others and to know the fashion trend of the world.

✓ I always spend time using Facebook, Instagram, or YouTube, mainly to get in touch with others and to know the fashion trends of the world.

'spend the time to use' 不自然，應改為 'spend time using'；'the Facebook' 不正確，應去掉定冠詞；'the others' 應改為 'others'；'fashion trend' 應用複數 'fashion trends'。

× Under the situation of no Internet, I think I may spend the time with my family, such as doing exercise, reading together or chatting or having dinner together.

✓ In the situation of no Internet, I think I may spend time with my family, such as exercising, reading together, chatting, or having dinner together.

'Under the situation' 不自然，應改為 'In the situation'；'spend the time' 改為 'spend time'；'doing exercise' 改為動名詞 'exercising'。

× Having equality times with my family also pays an important part of my life.

✓ Having quality time with my family also plays an important part in my life.

'equality times' 用詞錯誤，應為 'quality time'；'pays an important part' 不正確，應為 'plays an important part'；'of my life' 改為 'in my life'。