Internet— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 回答中有重复表达“when I was little”，且句子结构较为复杂，建议简化句子，避免重复，并且更自然地表达时间和经历。

Exemplo: I started using the internet when I was in primary school. Our teacher taught us how to use the keyboard and some software to play games, which really intrigued me.

Sugestão: 回答较为清晰，但有些重复“search for information”，建议合并相关内容，使用连接词使回答更连贯。

Exemplo: I use the internet almost every day, mainly for work tasks and searching for information on my computer or smartphone.

Sugestão: 回答内容明确，但句子结构简单，且“the Dota”用法不准确，建议改为“a game called Dota”，并丰富细节。

Exemplo: Yes, when I was young, I was obsessed with a game called Dota. Because I was addicted, my parents didn't allow me to use the computer for a while.

Sugestão: 时态使用不准确，“spent”应为“spend”，另外“search my phone”表达不自然，建议改为“check my phone”。

Exemplo: Yes, I spend a lot of time online. In fact, the internet is part of every aspect of my life. Every morning, the first thing I do is check my phone and watch some short videos.

Sugestão: 回答重复且不够具体，建议简化表达并提供更多具体活动作为替代。

Exemplo: It's hard to imagine life without the internet because I use it so much. If I couldn't use it, I might spend more time sleeping or reading books.

× my parents didn't allow me to use computer.

✓ my parents didn't allow me to use the computer.

这里缺少了定冠词“the”，因为“computer”是特指的，表示特定的电脑。英语中单数可数名词前通常需要冠词。

× Yes, I spent a lot of time online.

✓ Yes, I spend a lot of time online.

回答当前是否花很多时间上网，应该用一般现在时“spend”，而不是过去时“spent”。

× If I stop using the Internet I might just catch up some sleep.

✓ If I stop using the Internet, I might just catch up on some sleep.

短语“catch up on sleep”中需要介词“on”，表示补觉。缺少介词导致表达不完整。

× Otherwise I use Internet a lot.

✓ Otherwise, I use the Internet a lot.

“Internet”前需要加定冠词“the”，因为“the Internet”是固定搭配，表示特定的互联网。