Internet— Part 1 Relatório
Conversa
Part 1
Examinador
When did you start using the internet?
Candidato
When I was a child, about 6 years old, I start using Internet. I use the Internet to search some knowledge and the answers of my homework and besides I often watching video.
Examinador
How often do you go online?
Candidato
Every day I think in our in our society, Internet is an important is important part in our daily life. We is we can online through using mobile phone or.
Examinador
Can you remember a time you weren’t allowed to use the internet?
Candidato
When I was a child, my parents often forbidden me from using Internet if I haven't finished my homework. Typically that spending too much time online would bad for my study.
Examinador
Do you think you spend too much time online?
Candidato
Yes, I think I do spend much time on line because most of my work is done through the Internet, such as attend online meeting and chatting with my workmates. Besides work, I often spend a lot of time browsing social media. Browsing social media.
Examinador
What would you do without the internet?
Candidato
I think if I don't have Internet, maybe I should choose reading books. Novel is a good choice to kill time.
Avaliação
Total
Part 1
When did you start using the internet?
Pontuação: 60.0Sugestão: 回答中存在语法错误，如时态和动词形式不正确，且表达不够自然。建议注意时态一致性，使用更地道的表达方式，并避免冗余。
Exemplo: I started using the internet when I was about six years old. I mainly used it to find information for my homework and to watch videos.
How often do you go online?
Pontuação: 50.0Sugestão: 回答不完整且有重复和语法错误，表达不清晰。建议简洁明了地回答问题，并使用正确的句子结构。
Exemplo: I go online every day because the internet is an important part of our daily lives. I usually access it through my mobile phone.
Can you remember a time you weren’t allowed to use the internet?
Pontuação: 55.0Sugestão: 语法错误较多，表达不够流畅。建议注意动词时态和句子结构，使用连接词使表达更连贯。
Exemplo: When I was a child, my parents often forbade me from using the internet if I hadn't finished my homework because spending too much time online was bad for my studies.
Do you think you spend too much time online?
Pontuação: 65.0Sugestão: 回答内容较丰富，但存在语法错误和重复。建议注意句子完整性和避免重复，同时使用连接词使表达更自然。
Exemplo: Yes, I think I spend too much time online because most of my work, like attending online meetings and chatting with colleagues, is done through the internet. Besides work, I also spend a lot of time browsing social media.
What would you do without the internet?
Pontuação: 60.0Sugestão: 表达较简单且有语法错误，建议使用更自然的表达方式，并丰富细节。
Exemplo: If I didn't have the internet, I would probably spend more time reading books. Novels are a great way to pass the time and relax.
Gramática
× When I was a child, about 6 years old, I start using Internet.
✓ When I was a child, about 6 years old, I started using the Internet.
这里描述的是过去发生的动作，动词应使用过去式。"start"应改为"started"。
× I start using Internet.
✓ I started using the Internet.
"Internet"前应加定冠词"the"，因为"the Internet"是固定搭配。
× I use the Internet to search some knowledge and the answers of my homework and besides I often watching video.
✓ I use the Internet to search for some knowledge and the answers to my homework, and besides, I often watch videos.
"search"后应加介词"for"，"answers of my homework"应改为"answers to my homework"，"watching"应改为动词原形"watch"，且"video"应为复数形式"videos"。
× besides I often watching video.
✓ besides, I often watch videos.
动词"watch"后不应直接加"-ing"形式，除非有助动词或其他结构。此处应用动词原形"watch"。
× watching video.
✓ watching videos.
"video"在此处表示复数，应使用复数形式"videos"。
× Every day I think in our in our society, Internet is an important is important part in our daily life.
✓ Every day, I think in our society, the Internet is an important part of our daily life.
"Internet"前应加定冠词"the"，"part in our daily life"应改为"part of our daily life"，介词使用错误。
× Internet is an important is important part in our daily life.
✓ the Internet is an important part of our daily life.
"Internet"前应加定冠词"the"，"part in"应改为"part of"。
× part in our daily life.
✓ part of our daily life.
固定搭配是"part of"，而非"part in"。
× We is we can online through using mobile phone or.
✓ We can go online by using a mobile phone or other devices.
"We is"主谓不一致，应改为"We can"，且句子结构不完整，需补充完整表达。
× my parents often forbidden me from using Internet if I haven't finished my homework.
✓ my parents often forbade me from using the Internet if I hadn't finished my homework.
"forbidden"是过去分词，句中应使用过去式"forbade"，且"Internet"前应加定冠词"the"，"haven't"应改为过去完成时"hadn't"以符合条件句时态。
× using Internet
✓ using the Internet
"Internet"前应加定冠词"the"。
× if I haven't finished my homework.
✓ if I hadn't finished my homework.
条件句中描述过去未完成的动作，应使用过去完成时态。
× Typically that spending too much time online would bad for my study.
✓ Typically, spending too much time online would be bad for my studies.
"would bad"缺少动词"be"，"study"应为复数形式"studies"，且句首应加逗号。
× I think I do spend much time on line because most of my work is done through the Internet, such as attend online meeting and chatting with my workmates.
✓ I think I do spend a lot of time online because most of my work is done through the Internet, such as attending online meetings and chatting with my workmates.
"much time"口语中常用"a lot of time"，"on line"应合并为"online"，"attend"应改为动名词"attending"，"meeting"应为复数"meetings"。
× such as attend online meeting and chatting with my workmates.
✓ such as attending online meetings and chatting with my workmates.
"such as"后应接动名词形式，保持结构一致。
× attend online meeting
✓ attending online meetings
"meeting"应为复数形式"meetings"，表示多次会议。
× I think if I don't have Internet, maybe I should choose reading books.
✓ I think if I don't have the Internet, maybe I should choose to read books.
"Internet"前应加定冠词"the"，"choose reading"应改为"choose to read"。
× if I don't have Internet
✓ if I don't have the Internet
"Internet"前应加定冠词"the"。
× maybe I should choose reading books.
✓ maybe I should choose to read books.
动词"choose"后应接不定式"to read"，而非动名词"reading"。
× Novel is a good choice to kill time.
✓ Novels are a good choice to kill time.
"Novel"应使用复数形式"Novels"，且谓语动词应与主语复数一致，改为"are"。
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