Internet— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to give a direct response with a clear topic sentence, followed by specific supporting details. Use simple and correct sentence structures to improve clarity.

Exemplo: I started using the internet when I was a child, during my school years. I mainly used it to find information for my studies because it was very easy to access and helped me learn more effectively.

Sugestão: Your answer is confusing and lacks coherence. Focus on giving a clear and concise response with logical linking words. Avoid filler words and ensure your sentences are complete and relevant.

Exemplo: I usually go online in the morning and during the day. However, I try to limit my internet use in the evening so I can relax and enjoy other activities.

Sugestão: Your answer is understandable but could be clearer. Use correct grammar and provide a direct topic sentence followed by specific details. Linking words can help make your answer more coherent.

Exemplo: Yes, I remember a time when I wasn't allowed to use the internet because the connection was lost. As a result, I couldn't access any online resources during that period.

Sugestão: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and unclear. Try to give a direct opinion with supporting details, using clear and concise sentences. Avoid redundancy and ensure your answer is relevant to the question.

Exemplo: I don't think I spend too much time online. I usually use the internet for about one hour in the morning and another hour in the evening. Mostly, I use it more on weekends when I have free time.

Sugestão: Your answer is unclear and contains many errors. Provide a clear topic sentence and explain your ideas with specific examples. Use correct vocabulary and sentence structures to express your thoughts effectively.

Exemplo: Without the internet, I would rely on phone calls and face-to-face conversations to stay connected with people. It would be more difficult to communicate quickly, but I would find other ways to keep in touch.

× Do I start using that and I know when I was child during my school, Denver.

✓ I started using it when I was a child during my school days in Denver.

The sentence incorrectly uses present tense 'Do I start' instead of past tense 'I started' to describe a past event. Also, 'when I was child' lacks the article 'a'. The verb tense should match the past time frame indicated by 'when I was a child'.

× Do I start using that and I know when I was child during my school, Denver.

✓ I started using it when I was a child during my school days in Denver.

The word 'child' is singular and needs the article 'a' before it to be grammatically correct: 'a child'. Also, 'school' should be pluralized to 'school days' to better fit the context.

× Do I start using that and I know when I was child during my school, Denver.

✓ I started using it when I was a child during my school days in Denver.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. It combines questions and statements improperly. Rephrasing into a clear past tense statement improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× The time I I we're finding out information about study.

✓ At that time, I was finding out information for my studies.

The sentence has repeated words 'I I' and incorrect verb form 'we're' instead of 'was'. The sentence structure is awkward and needs rephrasing for clarity and correct tense.

× So it is very easy to access and to find anything for me.

✓ So it is very easy for me to access and find anything.

The preposition 'for' should be placed before 'me' to indicate who finds it easy. Also, 'to' before 'find' is unnecessary when paired with 'to access' in this context.

× I'm, uh, I'm open you're using a novel in in the morning time and mostly I'm using Internet in living with them in the day.

✓ I'm usually using the internet in the morning, and mostly I use the internet during the day.

The sentence incorrectly uses 'you're' instead of 'I'm' and has unclear pronoun references. 'Novel' is incorrect here; likely meant 'mobile' or 'device'. The sentence needs pronoun correction and clearer wording.

× mostly I'm using Internet in living with them in the day.

✓ Mostly, I use the internet while living with them during the day.

The phrase 'in living with them' is awkward; 'while living with them' is more appropriate. Also, 'in the day' should be 'during the day' for correct preposition use.

× I am less than using the Internet because I'm on the truth is so.

✓ I use the internet less because I am busy with other things.

The original sentence is unclear and grammatically incorrect. 'I am less than using' is not proper English. The sentence needs restructuring to convey the intended meaning clearly.

× Anytime is the Lexile time. Come on now, I left and enjoy.

✓ Anytime is the leisure time. Now, I log off and enjoy myself.

The original sentence is confusing and contains unclear phrases like 'Lexile time' and 'I left'. It needs to be rewritten for clarity and correct verb usage.

× Yes, I remember the time and I'm not allowed to write Internet was lost to the Internet connection, so I'm not going to the Internet.

✓ Yes, I remember the time when I was not allowed to use the internet because the internet connection was lost, so I could not access it.

The sentence mixes present and past tenses incorrectly. 'I'm not allowed' should be 'I was not allowed' to match past context. 'Write Internet' is incorrect; likely meant 'use the internet'. Verb tenses need to be consistent.

× That's why I'm not able to access Internet.

✓ That's why I'm not able to access the internet.

The noun 'internet' requires the definite article 'the' when referring to the global network. Missing 'the' is a common article error.

× Oh, I don't think so. I'm spending a lot of time on the Internet because of my I have just using one hour morning morning and almost one hour to hour in the evening.

✓ Oh, I don't think so. I spend a lot of time on the internet because I use it for just one hour in the morning and almost one to two hours in the evening.

The sentence incorrectly uses present continuous 'I'm spending' for habitual action, which should be simple present 'I spend'. Also, 'I have just using' is incorrect; it should be 'I use'. The time expressions need clarification.

× So I'm all I'm using mostly I'm using the Internet on the weekend when I'm hungry, so there.

✓ So mostly, I use the internet on weekends when I'm free.

The phrase 'when I'm hungry' is likely incorrect in context; 'when I'm free' or 'when I have time' is more appropriate. Also, 'on the weekend' should be 'on weekends' for habitual action. The sentence structure is awkward and needs simplification.

× Yeah, and I will not be using the eye without. I'm receiving I'm just calling Andrew conversation with the face to FaceTime stay connected with the people's so Internet.

✓ Yes, I will not be able to use it without the internet. I would just make calls and have face-to-face conversations to stay connected with people.

The original sentence is fragmented and contains unclear phrases like 'using the eye without' and 'calling Andrew conversation'. It needs to be rewritten for clarity and correct verb usage.