Internet— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 回答不够连贯，语法错误较多，表达不清晰。建议练习用完整句子表达时间点，并且简洁明了地说明开始使用互联网的原因。

Exemplo: I started using the internet when I was about 16 years old because my family bought a computer at home. I was curious about technology and wanted to explore different websites.

Sugestão: 回答中有语法错误和词汇使用不当，表达不够自然。建议使用正确的时态和词汇，清晰说明上网频率和原因。

Exemplo: I go online every day, especially recently because I need to study English for my exam. The internet provides many useful videos about vocabulary and pronunciation practice.

Sugestão: 回答内容混乱，语法和词汇错误严重，难以理解。建议练习用简单句子表达被限制上网的经历和原因。

Exemplo: Yes, I remember my parents limited my internet use when I was younger because they thought I was spending too much time online. They allowed me to use it only a few hours a week.

Sugestão: 回答中有语法错误和词汇拼写错误，表达不够清晰。建议使用正确的句子结构和词汇，具体说明上网时间和内容。

Exemplo: Yes, recently I think I spend too much time online because I often watch videos on my smartphone about how to learn English, such as vocabulary and pronunciation practice.

Sugestão: 回答表达不够自然，语法错误较多。建议用简单明了的句子说明没有互联网时的替代活动及其不便之处。

Exemplo: If I didn't have the internet, I would read English books to improve my skills. However, it would be less convenient than using online resources.

× Start using the Internet when with about a 60 year old because my family goes a computer at home.

✓ I started using the Internet when I was about 60 years old because my family had a computer at home.

句子结构混乱，缺少主语和谓语，时态不正确。应补充主语和谓语，使用过去时态表达过去的动作。

× I did some technology would divide anymore real quickly so.

✓ I found that technology would develop very quickly, so...

动词形式错误，'did'用法不当，应使用正确的动词表达发现或感受。

× I could explore different websites.

✓ I could explore different websites.

句子结构正确，无需修改。

× The Internet have me funny useful video.

✓ The Internet has many funny and useful videos.

主谓不一致，Internet作为单数名词，谓语动词应为has；video应为复数videos。

× It is about the English, so that the vocabularies and the practicing pronunciation.

✓ It is about English, including vocabulary and practicing pronunciation.

介词使用不当，'about the English'应为'about English'，'the vocabularies'应去掉定冠词，'practicing pronunciation'表达更自然。

× Is a remember man wouldn't shoot.

✓ I remember my parents wouldn't allow me to use it.

句子结构混乱，缺少主语和谓语，表达不清晰。应补充完整句子。

× My parents told me to use the Internet already because the variable.

✓ My parents told me not to use the Internet too much because of its effects.

代词使用错误，'variable'用法不当，表达不清晰，应改为更合适的词汇。

× The hills of my *** this sold spending too much time or like could harm miasole delimited my Internet use only a few hour a week.

✓ They said spending too much time online could harm me, so they limited my Internet use to only a few hours a week.

句子结构混乱，词汇错误，表达不清晰。应重组句子，使用正确词汇。

× I go every day, especially recently because I need to study English for my exam.

✓ I go online every day, especially recently because I need to study English for my exam.

缺少介词，'go'后应加'online'，时态使用正确。

× The Internet have me funny useful video.

✓ The Internet has many funny and useful videos.

主谓不一致，Internet为单数，谓语应为has；video应为复数videos。

× It is about the English, so that the vocabularies and the practicing pronunciation.

✓ It is about English, including vocabulary and practicing pronunciation.

介词使用错误，'about the English'应为'about English'，'the vocabularies'应去掉定冠词。

× Yes, recently I think I spend too much time online because I often use my smartphone to look the video about how to learn English.

✓ Yes, recently I think I spend too much time online because I often use my smartphone to watch videos about how to learn English.

动词搭配错误，'look the video'应为'watch videos'，视频应为复数。

× Said. Such as cabul, airy and how to practicing the pronunciation.

✓ Such as vocabulary, grammar, and how to practice pronunciation.

词汇拼写错误，'cabul'应为'vocabulary'，'airy'应为'grammar'，'practicing'应为不定式'practice'。

× If somehow in tonight today I should, I can read books about English because it can also improve my English skill.

✓ If somehow I can't use the Internet today, I can read books about English because it can also improve my English skills.

句子结构混乱，缺少连贯性，应调整语序并补充缺失部分。

× That is not very convenient.

✓ That is not very convenient.

句子正确，无需修改。