Internet— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 回答不够连贯，句子断断续续，缺少逻辑连接词，表达不自然。建议练习使用完整句子，并用连接词使表达更流畅。

Exemplo: I started using the internet during my secondary school years because all my friends used it to follow our favorite idols.

Sugestão: 回答较为完整，但句子结构有些重复，连接词使用不够自然。建议使用更多多样的句型和连接词，使表达更自然。

Exemplo: I go online every day because smartphones make it very convenient. Whenever I need to search for information or connect with friends, I use the internet.

Sugestão: 表达不够清晰，语法错误较多，句子不连贯。建议练习用完整句子表达原因和结果，使用连接词使表达更流畅。

Exemplo: Yes, when I was a child, especially before exams, my mother asked me not to use the internet so that I could concentrate on studying.

Sugestão: 回答中有语法和词汇错误，表达不清晰。建议用更准确的词汇和句子结构表达观点，并用连接词连接句子。

Exemplo: I think it depends. When I am free, I spend a lot of time online because I feel bored at home. However, when I am busy during the day, I don't spend much time online.

Sugestão: 表达不够连贯，句子结构混乱，词汇使用不准确。建议练习用完整句子表达假设和观点，使用连接词使表达更自然。

Exemplo: If I didn't have the internet, I might write a book or do some personal projects. Actually, it's hard to imagine life without the internet because it is part of everyone's daily life now.

× All of my friends like Stew.

✓ All of my friends like Stew.

该句中“friends”是复数，动词“like”与复数主语一致，语法正确，无需修改。

× Use the Internet to follow our favorite idol follow the.

✓ Use the Internet to follow our favorite idol.

句子中“follow the”多余且不完整，应删除以保持句子完整和正确。

× Because of the smartphone is very convenient to go online.

✓ Because the smartphone is very convenient to go online.

“Because of”后应接名词短语，不能直接接句子，改为“Because the smartphone...”使句子结构正确。

× In our daily life, so.

✓ In our daily life.

“so”在此处多余，应删除以保持句子完整。

× Every time I need to search something I will use the Internet or if I want to connect to my friends I will go online.

✓ Every time I need to search for something, I will use the Internet, or if I want to connect to my friends, I will go online.

“search”后应加介词“for”表示“搜索某物”，并且句子中缺少逗号，添加逗号使句子更清晰。

× Before every time before the exam my mom will ask the me too. Don't use the Internet.

✓ Before every exam, my mom asks me not to use the Internet.

“will ask the me too”结构错误，应改为“asks me”，且“Don't use the Internet”应改为宾语从句“not to use the Internet”。

× She wants me to be concentrated on my exam.

✓ She wants me to concentrate on my exam.

“be concentrated”用法错误，应使用动词不定式“to concentrate”表示“专注于”。

× So at that time I don't have chance to go online.

✓ So at that time I didn't have a chance to go online.

“chance”前缺少冠词“a”，且时态应与过去时间状语一致，改为过去时“didn't have”。

× I think it depends sometimes when I'm free.

✓ I think it depends. Sometimes when I'm free,

句子结构不完整，应分为两句或用逗号连接，使表达更清晰。

× I will spend a lot of time online BIC, AWS.

✓ I will spend a lot of time online because I am a bit bored at home.

“BIC, AWS”应为“because I am”，且“bored”形容词拼写错误，需改正。

× but if I'm quite busy in the day. I don't think I was spying.

✓ but if I'm quite busy during the day, I don't think I spend a long time on it.

“was spying”用词错误，应为“spend a long time”，且时态应与现在时态保持一致。

× Maybe I'll write a book or do some my own stuff.

✓ Maybe I'll write a book or do some of my own stuff.

“do some my own stuff”缺少介词“of”，应为“do some of my own stuff”。

× Actually, I can't. Imagine if I don't have the Internet, because for now I think the Internet is in everyones everytime's life.

✓ Actually, I can't imagine if I didn't have the Internet, because now I think the Internet is in everyone's everyday life.

“can't”后应接动词不定式“imagine”，时态应与假设语气一致，改为过去式“didn't have”。“everyones”应为“everyone's”，“everytime's”应为“everyday”。