Internet— Part 1 Relatório
Conversa
Part 1
Examinador
When did you start using the internet?
Candidato
I started to use the Internet when I was 12 years old. At that time I got my first computer.
Examinador
How often do you go online?
Candidato
I go online almost every day because my major is data science so I need to search for data and information online almost every day.
Examinador
Can you remember a time you weren’t allowed to use the internet?
Candidato
Yes, I still remember the period that that my mom cut off the Internet for about 3 months when I prepared for a really important exam. I felt a very anxious and unhappy when I know the news.
Examinador
Do you think you spend too much time online?
Candidato
Yes, I spent about 8 hours a day online because my main entertainment is the online games so an very addicted to their online games.
Examinador
What would you do without the internet?
Candidato
I will go outside to do some sports such as basketball or badminton. All I will read some romantic nobles to spend my spare time.
Avaliação
Total
Part 1
When did you start using the internet?
Pontuação: 75.0Sugestão: 回答较为简洁，但语言稍显生硬，建议使用更自然的表达方式，并避免重复“when”。
Exemplo: I began using the internet at the age of 12, right after I got my first computer.
How often do you go online?
Pontuação: 70.0Sugestão: 回答中有重复“almost every day”，建议简化句子结构，使用连接词使表达更流畅。
Exemplo: I go online almost every day since my major is data science, and I often need to search for data and information.
Can you remember a time you weren’t allowed to use the internet?
Pontuação: 65.0Sugestão: 语法错误较多，如“that that”、“felt a very anxious”，建议注意时态和冠词的使用，表达更准确。
Exemplo: Yes, I remember when my mom cut off the internet for about three months while I was preparing for an important exam. I felt very anxious and unhappy when I heard the news.
Do you think you spend too much time online?
Pontuação: 60.0Sugestão: 时态错误和语法错误较多，如“spent”应为“spend”，“an very addicted”不正确，建议加强语法基础。
Exemplo: Yes, I spend about eight hours a day online because my main entertainment is playing online games, and I am quite addicted to them.
What would you do without the internet?
Pontuação: 65.0Sugestão: 表达不够自然，“All I will read some romantic nobles”语法错误且用词不当，建议使用更地道的表达。
Exemplo: Without the internet, I would go outside to play sports like basketball or badminton, and I would also read some romantic novels in my free time.
Gramática
× I felt a very anxious and unhappy when I know the news.
✓ I felt very anxious and unhappy when I knew the news.
这里的动词时态错误，主句是过去时felt，时间状语从句也应使用过去时knew，而不是现在时know。动词know应改为knew以保持时态一致。
× Yes, I spent about 8 hours a day online because my main entertainment is the online games so an very addicted to their online games.
✓ Yes, I spend about 8 hours a day online because my main entertainment is online games, so I am very addicted to them.
句子中时态不一致，回答时应使用一般现在时spend而非过去时spent。且表达中存在冠词和代词错误，'an very addicted'应为'I am very addicted'，'the online games'应为'online games'，代词'them'指代前文的games。
× Yes, I spent about 8 hours a day online because my main entertainment is the online games so an very addicted to their online games.
✓ Yes, I spend about 8 hours a day online because my main entertainment is online games, so I am very addicted to them.
代词使用错误，'an'应为'I am'，且'their online games'不合适，应该用'them'指代前文的games。
× All I will read some romantic nobles to spend my spare time.
✓ Also, I will read some romantic novels to spend my spare time.
句首的'All'用法错误，应为'Also'表示“此外”。另外，'nobles'拼写错误，应为'novels'。
× All I will read some romantic nobles to spend my spare time.
✓ Also, I will read some romantic novels to spend my spare time.
单复数错误，'nobles'应为'novels'，表示“小说”，是复数形式。
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