T-shirt— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Cải thiện ngữ pháp và trật tự từ; rút ngắn câu để tự nhiên hơn, dùng một câu chủ đề rõ ràng rồi thêm 1–2 chi tiết hỗ trợ với liên từ phù hợp. Ví dụ: sửa thì (choose -> choosing), 'it's easier to choose clothes in the morning' và tránh lặp từ (easy/comfortable).

Exemplo: I wear T-shirts every day because they are comfortable. In addition, they make getting dressed in the morning quicker and are practical for outdoor activities.

Sugestão: Cải thiện ngữ pháp (subject-verb agreement, tense) và loại bỏ tiếng lấp lửng ('Umm'). Nên kết hợp thông tin vào 2 câu ngắn có liên từ: tần suất và thêm chi tiết về thói quen mua sắm. Tránh mâu thuẫn (he takes you but doesn't buy - làm rõ).

Exemplo: I usually buy T-shirts about twice a month. My boyfriend often takes me to the shopping center, but I usually pay for them myself.

Sugestão: Cải thiện ngữ pháp (số ít/ nhiều, thì), diễn đạt rõ ràng hơn và cung cấp chi tiết cụ thể hoặc ví dụ. Dùng liên từ để nối ý và tránh lặp từ 'always'. Nên nói rõ vì sao họ mặc màu sáng (ví dụ: văn hoá, khí hậu).

Exemplo: T-shirts are quite common among older people and are often brightly colored. For example, many seniors prefer vivid shades because they are cheerful and suit warm weather.

Sugestão: Sửa ngữ pháp quá khứ (wear -> wore, were -> was), loại bỏ mâu thuẫn 'doesn't didn't'. Giải thích rõ hơn với cấu trúc một câu chủ đề + một câu chi tiết. Tránh từ sai ('dishes' không phù hợp).

Exemplo: Yes, I wore T-shirts a lot when I was a child because my mother didn't buy many dresses or skirts. As a result, I mainly had T-shirts and trousers to wear.

× I wear T-shirts every day because it's very comfortable and easier to have activity outside, and it's easier to choosing clothing in every morning.

✓ I wear T-shirts every day because they are very comfortable and make it easier to do activities outside, and it's easier to choose clothes every morning.

Sentence has issues with pronoun-agreement and word forms: 'it's very comfortable' should be 'they are very comfortable' to agree with plural T-shirts (subject-verb and pronoun agreement). 'easier to have activity outside' is unnatural; use 'make it easier to do activities outside' (correct verb phrase and noun form). 'it's easier to choosing clothing in every morning' mixes 'to' with gerund and uses wrong article and word order; correct to 'it's easier to choose clothes every morning'. Suggestion: ensure plural agreement, use 'make it easier to do' for enabling actions, and use the infinitive form after 'easier to'.

× I buy T-shirts twice a month. Umm my boyfriend always take me to the shopping center to buy T-shirts and he doesn't buy for me.

✓ I buy T-shirts twice a month. Umm my boyfriend always takes me to the shopping center to buy T-shirts and he doesn't buy them for me.

'my boyfriend always take' is wrong because the singular subject 'boyfriend' requires 'takes' (third person singular). Also 'he doesn't buy for me' is missing the object; use 'he doesn't buy them for me'. Suggestion: pay attention to third-person singular 's' and include direct objects when needed.

× It's a symbolic and have a bright colour. I always see the older people always were shiny or brightly color.

✓ It is symbolic and has a bright color. I often see older people wearing shiny or brightly colored clothes.

Multiple errors: 'It's a symbolic' misuses 'symbolic' as countable noun; better 'It is symbolic'. 'have' should be 'has' to agree with singular 'it'. 'bright colour' is fine but ensure consistent spelling. Second sentence repeats 'always' and uses wrong tense and form: 'I always see the older people always were' should be 'I often see older people wearing'. Use 'wearing' (present participle) to describe appearance, and 'brightly colored' as a compound adjective. Suggestion: avoid repeated adverbs, use 'often' or 'always' once, use 'wearing' for clothes, and match verb forms.

× Did you wear T-shirts when you were a kid?

✓ Did you wear T-shirts when you were a kid?

The question is correct as written (past simple question). No change needed. Suggestion: keep past simple 'did' + base verb for past habits.

× I only wear T-shirt when I were a kid because my mom doesn't didn't buy skirt for me and dress as well so I just have dishes and pants.

✓ I only wore T-shirts when I was a kid because my mom didn't buy skirts or dresses for me, so I only had T-shirts and pants.

Several tense and agreement errors: 'I only wear' should be past 'wore' for childhood habit. 'I were a kid' must be 'I was a kid' (subject-verb agreement in past). 'doesn't didn't buy' is double negation and mixed tenses; correct is 'didn't buy' for past simple. 'buy skirt for me and dress as well' needs plural and conjunction: 'buy skirts or dresses for me'. 'I just have dishes and pants' is incorrect word choice 'dishes' should be 'T-shirts' or 'shirts' — likely 'shirts/T-shirts'; corrected to 'I only had T-shirts and pants.' Suggestion: use consistent past tense for past events, avoid double negatives, use correct nouns and plurals.