Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Improve grammar, clarity and add a direct topic sentence. Start with 'Yes' or 'No', use past tense correctly, and give one brief supporting detail. Keep it natural and under five sentences. For example, use 'I did' or 'I had a bike when I was a child' and add a short detail about how you used it.

Exemplo: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I used it to ride to school and explore my neighborhood with friends, which helped me feel independent.

Sugestão: Make your opinion clear in the first sentence, then give specific, concise reasons with linking words (e.g., 'because', 'however', 'nowadays'). Avoid absolute statements like 'no one'. Provide one or two concrete reasons or examples to support your view and stay within five sentences.

Exemplo: I don't think bikes are as popular now as they used to be because more people use cars and public transport nowadays. For example, in my city new roads and longer commutes have made cycling less common, and bike lanes are limited.

× It had back when I was child.

✓ I had one back when I was a child.

The original sentence uses 'It had' which incorrectly uses third-person pronoun 'It' and past-tense verb 'had' in place of the first-person subject 'I'. Also 'when I was child' is missing the article 'a' before 'child'. Correct subject 'I' and include the article produce a grammatical sentence. Suggestion: use the correct subject pronoun 'I' and include 'a' before 'child'.

× I don't think so, because when I was a child, yeah, the bike was popular, but nowadays I reckon that no one rides bikes anymore.

✓ I don't think so, because when I was a child bikes were popular, but nowadays I reckon that hardly anyone rides bikes.

The sentence mixes casual fillers and inconsistent phrasing. 'the bike was popular' incorrectly uses definite article 'the' when speaking generally; use plural 'bikes were popular' for general past habit. 'no one rides bikes anymore' is natural but stronger than speaker likely intends; 'hardly anyone' is more natural. Maintain present tense 'I don't think' and 'nowadays' with 'rides' (present simple) for habitual action. Also remove unnecessary filler 'yeah' for formality. Suggestion: use plural for general statements about a category and choose appropriate quantifier ('hardly anyone').