Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be clearer and more natural. Start with a direct topic sentence, then add a brief detail using linking words. Avoid unclear phrases like “I plugged this” and give a specific description of learning to ride (when, how, or who helped). Keep it within about 2–4 short sentences.

Exemplo: Yes, I did. I learned to ride my first bike when I was about six, and my father helped me by holding the seat at first. After practicing in the park several times, I soon felt confident riding on my own.

Sugestão: Provide a direct answer and then support it with a specific reason or example using a linking word. Correct small errors (duplicate "in") and avoid absolute claims unless you can justify them. Two to three sentences are enough.

Exemplo: Yes, I think bikes are very popular in Japan because many people use them for short commutes. For example, students and office workers often cycle to stations or shops due to convenience and low cost.

× Yes I did. I plugged this for many times to be able to ride a bike.

✓ Yes, I did. I practiced this many times to be able to ride a bike.

The student used 'plugged' which is incorrect here; the intended meaning is repeated practice. This is a word choice/verb form error: 'practice' (verb) in past simple 'practiced' (US) or 'practised' (UK) should be used. Also add a comma after 'Yes' and remove 'for' before 'many times'. Suggestion: use 'practiced/practised' and the phrase 'many times' without 'for'. Suggested corrected sentence: 'Yes, I did. I practiced this many times to be able to ride a bike.'

× Yes, I think bikes are the most popular transportation in in Japan.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are the most popular form of transportation in Japan.

The original has two issues: repeated preposition 'in in' and an awkward collocation 'popular transportation'. Use the noun phrase 'form of transportation' or simply 'mode of transport'. Also remove the duplicate 'in'. Suggestion: say 'form of transportation' or 'mode of transport' and ensure only one 'in' before 'Japan'.