Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Give a direct topic sentence, avoid filler (e.g., “uh”), and expand with one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Mention when you had the bike, why you couldn’t ride well, and any outcome or feeling to make the answer natural and informative.

Exemplo: Yes, I had a bike when I was about eight years old, but I couldn’t ride it very well at first. For example, I was afraid of falling and rarely practiced; as a result, I mainly used it while my parents held the seat. However, after a few lessons with a friend, I gradually gained confidence and could ride short distances by the time I was ten.

Sugestão: Start with a clear statement about overall popularity, avoid vague phrasing, and give specific supporting details using linking words (e.g., “for example,” “because”). Mention who rides bikes, where they ride, and a reason or example such as clubs or infrastructure to support your view.

Exemplo: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in cities and among young people. For example, many people join local cycling groups like the Right Bike Club to ride on weekends, and there are dedicated bike lanes in several towns, which makes cycling safer and more attractive.

× I had a bike, but uh, I could not ride a bike well.

✓ I had a bike, but I could not ride it well.

The original sentence is mostly correct in tense (past), but repetition of 'a bike' is awkward. Replace the second 'a bike' with the pronoun 'it' to refer back to the bike. This improves cohesion and avoids unnecessary repetition. Also remove filler 'uh' in formal responses.

× Oh yes, of course some people joined by Right Bike Club and enjoy riding a bike.

✓ Oh yes, of course some people join the Right Bike Club and enjoy riding bikes.

The original uses 'joined by Right Bike Club' which is incorrect. If you mean people are members, use 'join the Right Bike Club' (present simple for general fact). Also use plural 'bikes' or 'ride bicycles' for general statements. This keeps tense consistent (present simple for general truths) and fixes the incorrect preposition 'by'.