Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Keep the answer concise and correct grammar: start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid filler words. Also correct tense and agreement (e.g., "I didn't have a bike" and "my father owned"). Mention one clear reason for preference and one short example or memory.

Exemplo: I didn't have my own bike as a child, but my father owned two — a Splendor and a Bullet. I preferred riding the Bullet because I loved its loud engine sound, and at that time there were no restrictions on silencers, so it sounded even louder. I remember riding with my father to the market and feeling excited by the noise and speed.

Sugestão: Provide a clear, structured response: start with a direct opinion, then give specific supporting details and examples. Avoid repetition and unclear phrases. Use linking words (for example, because, for instance) and correct vocabulary (e.g., "food delivery services" not repeated or misnamed). Keep it to two or three sentences maximum and be respectful/neutral when describing people’s work.

Exemplo: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because they are cheap and convenient for short trips. For example, many people use motorcycles for food delivery services like Zomato, and others ride them to commute to work or study. As a result, you see motorcycles everywhere, especially in crowded cities.

× When I was child, I don't have a bike but my father owns 2 bikes, one is Splendor and 1 is a bullet.

✓ When I was a child, I didn't have a bike, but my father owned two bikes: one was a Splendor and the other was a Bullet.

Errors: missing article before 'child' (article error, ID 22), wrong tense/inconsistency with time reference 'When I was a child' requires past tense (past tense issue, ID 5), incorrect numerals style and article use. Suggestion: use 'a child', use past simple consistently ('didn't have', 'owned', 'was'), write numbers as words in formal sentences ('two') and use 'the other' to refer to the second item.

× But mostly I like to ride bullet because I like the sound of the bullet and on that time there is no restrictions on a Bullet silencers.

✓ But mostly I liked riding the Bullet because I liked the sound of the Bullet, and at that time there were no restrictions on Bullet silencers.

Errors: tense mismatch — story is in the past, so use past tense (ID 5). Use verb + -ing after 'like' for habitual action in past ('liked riding') (ID 8). Article errors: 'ride bullet' needs 'the Bullet' (ID 22/17). Plural agreement: 'no restrictions' matches plural 'silencers', and 'were' is correct for past 'there were' (There be issue, ID 3). Suggestion: keep past tense throughout, use 'liked riding', include appropriate articles, and use 'at that time' for correct preposition.

× So it's like uh, it's a sound like loud and and I like loud sounds.

✓ So it made a loud sound, and I liked loud sounds.

Errors: tense inconsistency — original context is past, so use past simple (ID 5). Redundant and informal fillers ('uh', repeated 'and') should be removed (sentence structure error, ID 26). 'It's a sound like loud' is ungrammatical; use 'made a loud sound'. Suggestion: simplify to clear past tense statements, remove fillers, and use correct verb forms for sound descriptions.

× Uh, yes, bikers very popular in my country, other people on their bike and most of the people of my country, uh, do work on the bike like some of the people do Zomato like food delivery and other and other people do as a tomato as a part time worker.

✓ Yes, bikes are very popular in my country. Many people travel on their bikes, and most people in my country use bikes for work: some people do food delivery for companies like Zomato, and others work part time on bikes.

Errors: subject-verb and noun number issues — 'bikers very popular' lacks verb and mixes plural/singular (subject-verb agreement, ID 27 and sentence without a verb, ID 23). 'Other people on their bike' needs verb and plural 'bikes' (singular/plural issue, ID 1). Awkward and unclear phrases 'do Zomato like food delivery' and 'do as a tomato' are incorrect word choices and structure (word choice and sentence structure, IDs 26 and 11). Suggestions: add verbs ('are', 'travel'), use plural nouns where appropriate ('bikes'), clarify roles ('food delivery for companies like Zomato'), and avoid repetition.

× So they aren't good.

✓ So those jobs are not well paid or are not very good.

Errors: vague and grammatically odd negative 'they aren't good' lacks clear reference and may misuse adjective 'good' to describe jobs or pay (incorrect use of adjectives/adverbs, ID 13). Suggestion: specify what 'not good' means (e.g., 'not well paid' or 'not good jobs') and use proper noun or pronoun reference ('those jobs') to be clear.