Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be clear and coherent: start with a direct topic sentence, correct basic grammar (past tense), avoid repetition and fillers, and add one or two specific supporting details linked logically. Use linking words (for example, "because" or "so") and keep it within 3–4 sentences.

Exemplo: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was a small blue bike that my father gave me for my tenth birthday, and I loved it because we used to cycle together every weekend. Because it was inexpensive, I remember it mainly for the time we spent riding rather than for how it looked.

Sugestão: Answer directly with a clear opinion, use correct grammar and sentence structure, and support your view with one or two specific reasons or examples connected by linking words (e.g., "because", "however"). Keep answers concise and natural (no fragments).

Exemplo: In my area, bikes are not very popular because most people prefer cars due to long distances and hot weather. However, bikes are becoming more common in cities where traffic is heavy and people want to save money on transport.

× Yeah, when I was a child. I have a blue back.

✓ Yeah, when I was a child. I had a blue bag.

The student is speaking about a past time ('when I was a child'), so the verb should be in the past tense. 'Have' (present) should be 'had' (past). Also 'back' is a spelling error for 'bag'. Suggestion: use past tense verbs consistently when describing past events and check spelling.

× This is gift from my father for my birthday and I love this bag because it's not expensive but it's memorable and give me umm, it's given by my.

✓ It was a gift from my father for my birthday, and I loved this bag because it wasn't expensive but it was memorable and given to me by my father.

Multiple article, tense and sentence structure issues here. 'This is gift' lacks the indefinite article 'a' and also should be past tense ('It was a gift') since the event occurred in the past. 'Give me... it's given by my' is ungrammatical: use the passive 'given to me by my father' or active 'my father gave it to me.' Also maintain past tense ('loved', 'was') to match the time frame. Suggestion: break long ideas into clear clauses and keep tense consistent.

× ...and give me umm, it's given by my.

✓ ...and it was given to me by my father.

The fragment 'and give me umm, it's given by my' lacks correct verb form and object placement. 'Give me' is present/incomplete; 'it's given by my' misses the recipient and subject. Use the passive 'given to me by my father' or active 'my father gave it to me' for clarity. Suggestion: decide active or passive voice and complete the clause with subject and object.

× My part of you know, because lots of people prefer car so bike is isn't popular.

✓ In my part of the country, you know, because lots of people prefer cars, bikes aren't popular.

This sentence has word order and agreement problems. 'My part of you know' is scrambled — correct phrase is 'In my part of the country, you know.' 'Prefer car' needs plural 'cars' because 'lots of people' implies multiple cars. 'Bike is isn't popular' has double negative and agreement errors; 'bikes aren't popular' matches plural subject and correct negative form. Suggestion: reorganize phrase order, ensure subject-verb agreement, and avoid double negatives.