Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be direct, use correct tense and avoid repetition. Start with a clear topic sentence that answers the question, then add one or two specific supporting details (where you used it, who gave it, or a memorable memory). Use past tense for childhood and correct grammar ("I did" or "Yes, I had one"). Keep it within 3–4 short sentences and include linking words (e.g., "and", "so", "because").

Exemplo: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was a small red bicycle that my parents bought me for my seventh birthday, and I rode it to school and around the neighborhood every day. Because it was lightweight, I learned to cycle quickly and always felt proud of it.

Sugestão: Give a clear, direct opinion and support it with specific, relevant details. Avoid unclear phrases ("the marks") and vague filler ("you know"). Mention concrete evidence such as bike lanes, bike-sharing schemes, or how many people cycle and why (health, cost, traffic). Use linking words ("for example", "because", "also") and keep answers to 2–4 sentences.

Exemplo: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. For example, many cities have dedicated bike lanes and a widespread bike-sharing system, so people use bicycles for short commutes and errands. Also, cycling is promoted for health and to reduce traffic congestion, which makes it a common choice.

× Yes, I I have.

✓ Yes, I did.

Type IDs: 5 (Past tense issue) and 27 (Subject-verb agreement errors). The question asks about possession in the past ('Did you have... when you were a child?') so the student should use the past tense. 'I have' is present tense and also contains a repetition 'I I'. Correct past-tense short answer is 'Yes, I did.' Suggestion: use past simple for past events and avoid repeating words; for short answers use auxiliary 'did' when question used did. Grammar problem type ID:5

× Yes, the marks are in all around the city and in the company there, you know.

✓ Yes, there are bike racks all around the city and at companies there.

Type IDs:11 (Incorrect use of prepositions),22 (Article errors),26 (Sentence structure errors) and 1 (Singular and plural issue). The student used 'the marks' which is unclear and likely incorrect for 'bike racks' or 'bike lanes'; 'are in all around the city' has wrong preposition order and extra words; 'in the company there' is awkward and wrong article/preposition use. The corrected sentence uses plural 'bike racks' to agree with 'all around the city' and uses 'there are' as the correct existential construction. 'At companies' sounds natural for workplaces. Suggestion: choose the correct noun (bike racks/lanes), use 'there are' for existence, place prepositional phrases in normal order ('all around the city'), and use 'at' for locations like companies.