BikePart 1 Relatório

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Part 1

Examinador

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Candidato

Did you have a bike when you are child?

Examinador

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Candidato

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Avaliação

Total

Total: 5.5Fluência e coerência: 5.5Pronúncia: 6.0Gramática: 5.5Recurso lexical: 6.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Pontuação: 40.0

Sugestão: 你没有直接回答考官的问题,而且使用了错误的时态和人称。注意先用肯定或否定的主题句直接回应,然后用一到两句具体细节来丰富答案,句子不要超过五句。练习时关注过去时的正确使用(e.g. "I had")并在必要时使用连接词如“because”或“so”。

Exemplo: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was a small red bicycle with training wheels because my parents wanted me to learn safely. I rode it to the park every weekend and practiced until I could balance on my own.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Pontuação: 35.0

Sugestão: 你直接重复了考官的问题,没有给出任何回答。应该直接给出观点的主题句,然后用一至两句具体理由或例子支持观点,并使用连接词使表达连贯(例如“because”或“however”)。控制在最多五句内并使用与话题相关的词汇如“commuting”“environmentally friendly”。

Exemplo: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in cities for short commutes because they are cheap and convenient. Many people also choose bikes for environmental reasons and to avoid traffic jams.

Gramática

There be issue

× Did you have a bike when you are child?

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

错误类型:There be/tense搭配问题。原句使用了过去时问句“Did you have...”,但时间状语“when you are child”错误使用现在时且漏了冠词。应该把时间状语也用过去时并加上不定冠词“a”。建议:当谈论过去发生的事情时,主句和时间状语要保持过去时一致;并注意可数名词前加冠词。

Present tense issue

× Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

此句语法正确,无需修改。该句使用现在时询问一般事实,主语、谓语和时态一致,表达清晰。

Vocabulário

PopularWell-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
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