Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Speak in a clear, grammatical sentence that directly answers the question, then add one or two supporting details. Use past tense consistently and avoid repetition. For example, start with “Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.” then give specific details (who gave it to you, how old you were, what you liked about it) and link them with simple connectors like “because” or “and.” Also correct word choice — don’t say “when I was a driver” if you mean “a child.”

Exemplo: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was bright red and my parents bought it for me when I was seven, and I loved riding it around the neighbourhood because it was fast and easy to control.

Sugestão: Give a direct opinion, then support it with clear, specific reasons. Use appropriate vocabulary (e.g. “popular,” “convenient,” “affordable,” “bike-sharing apps”) and linking words like “because” or “for example.” Avoid unclear fragments and repeated phrases. If you mention technology, name it correctly (e.g. “bike-sharing apps”).

Exemplo: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because they are inexpensive and convenient for short trips. For example, many cities now have bike-sharing apps that make it easy to find and unlock a bike, so more people choose cycling for commuting and errands.

× Yes, I had when I was a driver, I had a bike and this is and this color is is red and I very like it.

✓ Yes, when I was young I had a bike. Its color was red and I liked it very much.

Multiple errors: incorrect time expression 'when I was a driver' (context asks childhood) corrected to 'when I was young'; repetition and tense inconsistency 'I had when I was a driver, I had a bike' simplified; 'this is and this color is is red' has redundant words and present tense 'is' should be past 'was' to match 'had'; 'I very like it' uses incorrect word order and tense; correct form is 'I liked it very much'. Suggestions: use consistent past tense for past events, avoid redundant phrases, place adverbs correctly ('very much' after verb).

× Yes, I could I could buy very popular in my country because it's very easy to use and this uh, this app having recovery in a in a way.

✓ Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because they are easy to use, and there are apps that help with bike recovery.

Errors include misuse of modal 'could' and repetition 'I could I could buy' which is inappropriate here; 'buy very popular' is ungrammatical—need subject 'bikes' and adjective 'popular'; tense and subject agreement fixed with 'bikes are'; 'this app having recovery' wrongly uses present participle 'having' and unclear noun 'recovery'—rephrased to 'apps that help with bike recovery'. Suggestions: choose correct subject and verb forms, avoid repeating modals unnecessarily, use relative clauses ('apps that...') instead of dangling participles, ensure verbs agree with subjects.